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Not Just Friends Anymore

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by Anonymous

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by Swedeq04/15/07

A little too rushed....

Slow down. Take your time with the characters. Feel them AND what their feeling then write it all down (that's the hard part)

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by Anonymous04/15/07

review for "Not Just Friends Anymore"

Not bad at all for a 1st try. Keep writing, and don't get discouraged. You show a great deal of promise as a budding author. *S*

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by Kitschshaman11/05/11

Excellent ...

I liked it a lot. It had feeling, not just the .. well, I'll leave the description alone, we all know what the formula stuff is ... thank you.

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by Anonymous10/25/13

Damnnn

D A M N

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