The Last 24 Hours: Epilogue

give us more of this story,i loved it.

keep us updated on the couple every week.

A fitting end to a great tale

Landrious:

it's been a great ride and I thank you for the trip. Ronnie W.

Thanks

An overall fitting end, a bit short, but very good. I have liked this story the whole way. Can't wait to see what you start next.

What next?

The problem with finishing a good book is that you may have to wait a long time for the next one by the same author.
Excellant work. Hope you are hard at work on a new story.
Congrats,
Jim

Wow

you definitely know how to bring the emotions to the surface, so I hope you continue on with this couple and their new adventures as husband and wife.

Awesome story

Thanks for writing such a wonderful story. I enjoyed the plot and the dialogue, and the sex wasn't too bad either. ;)

Congrats Alex

Congrats Alex on the wedding and Landrious i loved the story but why stop at Dearly Beloved We would love to find out how he comes out and find out if Beth and Alex has any children .
Pat Murray.
Atlanta,Ga

Wished you kept going

It would have been so much better if the story had kept going during the wedding.thanks for a great story.
Pat

Exhausting

tale, far too long. The first few chapter were fine. Then I was speedreading the last chapters so I could get to the end. The last part was too unlikely and so unbelievable it did not work for me.

good story

I really enjoyed it. The only thing that stands out is that her bisexuality was never discussed or resolved when her and Alex became a couple.

good story

i really enjoyed it. a bit over the top at times, but excellent non the less. i disagree with the reviewer who thought it was to long, if anything the last chapter could have continued a bit. again a great read, i'll be looking forward to more work by landrius

Great Ending

Alex wasn't the only one to almost hyperventilate at Josh, I started to also after I read that part. Great story altogether and can't wait to read more of your work.

Entertaining...

Your story was definitely entertaining, and I guess that's what counts. I did spend a lot of time chuckling, since so much of it reads like a really bad Clive Cussler novel. More help from your editor could have made a difference.

Great Story!

I stayed up overnight and finally finished the story. It was so interesting. I was concerned that Lisa might know of Alex being allergic to alcohol and try to kill him that way or that Alex would accidentilly drink out of Beth's wine glass. These are the two things I thought would end this love story and I am glad they didn't. There were a few bumps in the story line where miss placed words were located, but I got the gist of this love story and dismissed them. Great story line again! I am waiting for the next installments oon Alex and Beth. I have always liked red-heads. I have always like anal (but never did it with a woman). You brought them both together in this story. Thank You very much. Chris

Simply the best..

:-) Very entertaining!

Great.

I got so involved that I had to read this in one sitting. I hope that you write more.

A Author indeeed

Thank you for the RIDE and your very productive mind, simply put, the best yet

Great story

As I said great story just a little too long

Thank you

What an intriguing story. The only suggestion I could make would be to have some closure with the ex and the twins. Other than that it was an excellent journey.

twins

The story was great but i dont think im the only one thinking there should he a continuation about the twins. Id love to see them as they mature and have themselves and their mother get through the trauma dealt to them by Dunne and reconnect as friends with Alex

Fan Fucking tastic

One of the best stories I have read if this was in book form I would have bought it. I agree with some of the other comments there should be closure with the ex and with the twins. KEEP ON WRITING

....you've kept me up 'till 3 AM finishing this damn intriguing story... and I have to work ... well done... It should be easier for such gifted writers to be published.

DEARLY BELOVED TO A BRIDEGROOM

is like Amen to a corpse, Maybe. TK U MLJ LV NV

Please write another short epilogue giving peace to your readers.

I would like for Lisa's psychiatric treatment to be successful and that she cheerfully served her time, she should get prison time but maybe not as much as I thought at first. It would be nice if he had some reconciliation with the twins and they could realize what their mother had done to them. Also how much Betty and George got from the bank as a settlement for the injuries they sustained. And announce Beth's first baby. Inquiring minds want to know, LOL. Yes, I know that it is just a story, a great story, by the way. Thank you for writing. I am still looking for an ending to the "Mall" story with the ex-Marine.

*****

Enjoyed your tale. After a slow start it became exciting. It's a few years old now so I don't expect you read the comments now. It could have done without the anal intercourse. Thanks for a long read. Cheers!

1 star

u ain't no web spinner, s w mo hermit or the other few great story tellers.

So maybe a GREAT editor could have saved this

But you were too long winded. Way too much extraneous stuff. WAY too long. There was a decent story hidden in somewhere. Too bad it got lost.

The one loose thread

What happened with the twins? How did they react to the bracelets that Alex gave them?

A very good story that had stroke scenes that went on way too long. If I get bored with the sex scenes I start scanning. I scanned many pages. I try to avoid stories that take a week to read.
JimC

Failed the kids

So Alex was bitter that he was abandoned by his parents and basically raised by his grandmother...The twins end up being raised by their grandparents not by their mega millionaire dad. It is critical that he and Beth get custody and begin deprogramming them and rebuilding the relationship he had with them before it is too late. Everyone else is dead or in jail and the grandparents are too old to take on two teenagers. The fact that they are not his bio-kids and they have hurt his feelings? Man up and be a parent! Try to help Lisa as well. Not as a partner but as a victim of rape and brainwashing over 20 years. Maybe when she gets out of prison, she can start a normal life and reunite with her kids.