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by Reltne06/16/06

Verbals ?

Why "reminder" instead of "reminding"? It supports your rhyme scheme better.

" . . .
binding
reminder to never
. . . "

Otherwise an interesting read.

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by 06/17/06

Nice word play

It's good to see your work again, 4. Another stellar poem written with a silent melody.

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