All Comments on 'Awakening Lust'

Short, sweet and bloody excellent

Can't wait for your next chapter. I liked the read.

Loved it!!! Cant wait for the next chapter...

great story

Not fair to tease us like that! Hurry back with more!!!

I didn't care to much for the sentence structure and the way the story flowed, I think it could have been proof read a little more before submission.

I liked the story an set-up.

Be more courageous when oiling your mother. Take initiative and massage her bum and fuck her.

great story got me hot

Ijust can't take it. You need to continue this story. This was great.

Ijust can't take it. You need to continue this story. This was great. I'm sorry about that last 1 I meant to rate it 100

We have to thave the rest of the story!

MORE,MORE,MORE - 0000000000000000000000000please, please please

very realistic!!

Thats fuckin hott you've gotta continue this!

iv read a thousand of em with the same story story line..it wasnt good enuff

This story gave me a hearton and I came all over my self, please keep up the good work!!!

Thanks for a fantstic story. It got me so arroused that i was dribbling into my pants Hadd to go and work it off. i only ever had those feelings once for my own mum and was as she lay in her bath one evening and i walked in on her and then i wanted to fuck her

NICE!!!!!!!!

does she have another son to have a four handed massage with!!!!

Fuckn perverts dirty pigs

He should pulled off her panties and fucked her right there.

it is semi erotic. not enough. I am mother fucher no no mother cunt licker. I always want to my tongue on my mother's cunt. she has a huge cunt. it invites me to lick very bad. also i would like to see my mother to be fucked by my friends, infront of my father.

that was a major teaser cant wait to read the next one

You said TO BE CONTINUED, please non't stop now. Let us hear from you soon, this was a good read. Well done and sexy. thanks .............LAROC OF AGES

That's a great comment by Andy's mother (for the time being). A mother should always be ready to give her boy a handjob, to take his stiff young prick in her delicate little hand and stroke it till he unloads his young balls all over the place. It's just the decent motherly thing to do.

I just had to get my 3.5 inch rock hard cock out and wank it hard reading this story. I shot my load of spunk all over the kitchen floor. Not bad for a 60 year old! I would like to have watched you and your mum, she sounds really sexy. When do you get to screw her? Can't wait for that story. Tell us the size of your cock and if your mother is trimmed or shaved in the pussy area. I hope she's got some pubes.

I'm off to Ch. 02,

You need an editor, (butt not but, tongue not tounge, and others) but otherwise it's a good beginning. I would suggest that you make the chapters longer as most readers will vote higher on multiple page chapters. I always read what I write at least a few times to catch errors and check the flow.

that wis a shity storey big cock cord

what a piece of crap this was.

Here is my only wish.

Version (a): for this to happen to me!

If (a) is out of the question, then

Version (b): for this to be my most vivid dream!

I never thought this way on seeing my mom. we are very close till today, sharing the same bed, till yesterday she bathed me naked and I did not feel erotic. but today after reading this story a strange feeling born into me. mom saw my penis stiffened. she was normal as usual as before. but she soaped my stiffened penis with slightly smiling and changed her clothes in front of me, showed her beautiful body. I want to touch her and feel her.

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SENFGLAS IS KAPPAPRIDE

My mom had always been a hot mom and I knew it, she is 5'5 and has nice kind of sagging 34dd boobs. I would often get a glimpse of them as I would open her door to watch her shower, and as the running water rolled down her, I would often get hard and jack off. One day as my dad was out of town my mom forced me to go to the acupuncture place. I complained but she wouldn't cancel her appointment. As I was sitting in the room waiting for her to come in she comes in in a small silk robe that was barely holding her tits in. I slowly started to get a boner but she didn't notice. Then the acupuncturist walks in and starts to tell her to lay on the table. She dropped her robe nod then her gorgeous tits emerged. As she lays face down on the table I can she her nice hairy pussy. I could feel the pre cum dripping on my now fully hard 8 inch dick. Then she turns over and her fully body emerges. 15minutes later she was done. I quickly made my move, and I cup one of her nice breasts. As I slowly turn her over I move her to the ground and I drop my shorts. I can see the lust in her eyes and as I jump on her rubbing her cilt until she starts to moan and the shove my dick in her oussy. Then my hot teacher Sarah walks in and I grab her and strip her as she starts sucking my balls as she starts to be eaten out by my mom she has an ass that looks like Kim k and I shove my dick in as she screams. Then she starts to grab my dick with her oussy and the ass her oussy juices boil and make my balls tingle I lull out and start to come all over all of them on their face and tits. As I finish I still have a raging boner and shove my dick up her ass. And give both of them anal while they finger each other kissing as sucking each others magnificent tits. to be continued.

I fucked my Aunt.

She only has one leg and is 40.

We were left alone in her house and she gave me a hug (which is normal).

Then she started to lean in for a kiss. She sometimes kisses me because we are family. I suddenly got a hard cock and she looked surprised. She asked me "is my tight one legged Jean sexy?" Because I was horny I said YES! She sticks her tongue out and pulls her trousers down and pants. She says " my only leg is getting tired can you carry me to bed please?" I say "of course" , I pick up my one legged naked aunt and carry her. I put her on the bed and she says "please stay I need company" I sat down beside her and she pulls me close to her face. She kisses me moistly. I climb onto her bed and get my cock out. She grabs my boner and shoves it in her pussy. And we fucked for 3 hours.

she came interested in sexual stuff early. She would 'accidentally' let me see her naked pussy.

I fuckd my female cousin and her dog fucks her

This was a very good story. I am wonderfully around!

Good opening to the story

I was just starting to get aroused, look forward to the next chapter

Great story should have been longer just started to get hard

Does such kind of sexual acts really happening between a Mother and Son in this world?

Mina pean ka emaga proovima seda asja tegema.Mul on öösiti munn nii kõva siis kui ema ja isa nussisid teises toas.Käisin öösel nende ukse taga ja paotasin natukene lahti ja nägin kuidas isa ema tagant nikkus,ning ema oigas valjusti.Mul oli korra tung kolmandaks minna,aga mõtlesin ringi.Nüüd ootan kui isa pikemaks ajaks ära läheb,siis võtan asja tõsiselt kätte.Ema on ikka nii,nii kirglik,olgugi oma vanuse kohta noor,54.aastane.Oi ma ootan seda aega.

Like most of the writers that say,to be .......continued. And never heard of again,its a good start but not ended.Thanks

Want more story. I want to read about them fucking etc.

It went too fast, was too predictable, and needed some editing. Other than that, it was not too bad.

3 Stars..Sorry...So much like so many others have written (applying lotion to Mom's body)

Great story