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How Impressive - Your Best To Date & Climbing
Deserved much higher than the measly 100 as you continue the march to Story Teller Supreme. Silly?
I think not as one of many that you aroused and entertained in a lifelike manner that was possible and moving.
It takes more than talent to reach your level among the best and I have watched your credibility grow as you walked the path diligently, with respect and consequence in some shape.
KUDO's Author - another at interval please.
With Very High Regard
good but
wasnt there a similar story that got posted here a few days ago?
A Beautiful, Touching Story!
A second chance for both of them. Great job!
Bravo Jack
I can not say in words how happy that I am with the fact you didn't take her to Walmart or own the state of Colorado.
Thanx Jack
Your story...
...has been mentioned in the Story Review thread found in the Author's Hangout in the Literotica Forums.
Lizzy
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http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showth read.php?t=428901
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http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showth read.php?t=428875
Great
I enjoyed this story very much.
Boyd
Great story
what more can I say
Two thumbs up
Very sweet and heartfelt. It certainly tucks at the heartstring. There is hope for blind people after all.
Only thing I dislike about the story is the long exclamation. I find that unnecessary. You might want to tone it down. Overall it was a great job well done.
Erotic and Touching
beautifully done.
thank you.
Beautiful story
A compassionate story with true feelings of love emblazzened through it.
Congratulations on a sensitive and humane story.
Abeautiful, heart warming...
story. I loved every word.Bravo.
Great Story
Avery beautiful and great story. Thank you .
Great story, thank you
Liked it when I first read it and I still do. Thanks, jack.
Terrific
Beautiful story coupled with great writing. Thanks for a wonderful read.
GREAT STORY
Very touching and true to life. It's amazing what tender loving care can do for a person. I just wish there was more of it in the world. Thank you for a very enjoyable read. Merry Christmas Jack
Character
One of first tales that I have read that was not about characters but about character.
again you amaze me
your stories touch the heart - I hope you never quit writing - thank you for sharing
Great story!
this is a great story. it's carries hope & has a good amount of development for a short story and still has some great sex scenes.
Very well done
The story was inspiring in the hope that past mistakes can be overcome with the new child. I liked the fact that the blind woman can now take care of herself due to his encouragement and that they are a team at work. Well done.
Loving Wife
A story that actually has a loving wife and some one to love her. Thank you so much. The ugliness did not win. I'm about to cry at finding such a story amongst all the mean, nasty and twisted things trying to pass for stories.
damn fine story
Completly unexpected.
The Best
This is the best one I have read in the 6 years I have been in here .
Thanks
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One word.... Beautiful
great story
I really enjoyed this story.
Feel Good Story
I really enjoyed this story immensely, 5 stars⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Fabulous story
Well written. One of the best I have read on this site. 5 stars!
VERY GOOD ENJOYED THE STORY TO BAD THE EX HUSBAN DID NOT GET HIS ASS KICKED AND HIS BALLS SHOVED UP HIS ASS.
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