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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/22/06

How Impressive - Your Best To Date & Climbing

Deserved much higher than the measly 100 as you continue the march to Story Teller Supreme. Silly?

I think not as one of many that you aroused and entertained in a lifelike manner that was possible and moving.

It takes more than talent to reach your level among the best and I have watched your credibility grow as you walked the path diligently, with respect and consequence in some shape.

KUDO's Author - another at interval please.

With Very High Regard

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by Anonymous06/22/06

good but

wasnt there a similar story that got posted here a few days ago?

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by Anonymous06/22/06

A Beautiful, Touching Story!

A second chance for both of them. Great job!

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by leapyearguy06/22/06

Bravo Jack

I can not say in words how happy that I am with the fact you didn't take her to Walmart or own the state of Colorado.
Thanx Jack

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by 06/22/06

Your story...

...has been mentioned in the Story Review thread found in the Author's Hangout in the Literotica Forums.

Lizzy

Story Review Thread {this is where the review is - please do not comment on this thread}
http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showth read.php?t=428901

Story Review Comment Thread {this is where you can comment on the review}
http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showth read.php?t=428875

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by Anonymous06/23/06

Great

I enjoyed this story very much.

Boyd

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by Anonymous06/23/06

Great story

what more can I say

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by Anonymous06/25/06

Two thumbs up

Very sweet and heartfelt. It certainly tucks at the heartstring. There is hope for blind people after all.

Only thing I dislike about the story is the long exclamation. I find that unnecessary. You might want to tone it down. Overall it was a great job well done.

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by Anonymous06/25/06

Erotic and Touching

beautifully done.

thank you.

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by Anonymous08/09/06

Beautiful story

A compassionate story with true feelings of love emblazzened through it.
Congratulations on a sensitive and humane story.

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by Anonymous08/19/06

Abeautiful, heart warming...

story. I loved every word.Bravo.

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by Rictic08/19/06

Great Story

Avery beautiful and great story. Thank you .

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by Alvaron5302/01/07

Great story, thank you

Liked it when I first read it and I still do. Thanks, jack.

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by Orion62307/15/07

Terrific

Beautiful story coupled with great writing. Thanks for a wonderful read.

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by Anonymous12/08/08

GREAT STORY

Very touching and true to life. It's amazing what tender loving care can do for a person. I just wish there was more of it in the world. Thank you for a very enjoyable read. Merry Christmas Jack

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by Anonymous07/12/09

Character

One of first tales that I have read that was not about characters but about character.

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by mikothebaby03/03/10

again you amaze me

your stories touch the heart - I hope you never quit writing - thank you for sharing

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by Anonymous03/19/11

Great story!

this is a great story. it's carries hope & has a good amount of development for a short story and still has some great sex scenes.

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by SandmanNC08/05/11

Very well done

The story was inspiring in the hope that past mistakes can be overcome with the new child. I liked the fact that the blind woman can now take care of herself due to his encouragement and that they are a team at work. Well done.

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by Anonymous01/21/13

Loving Wife

A story that actually has a loving wife and some one to love her. Thank you so much. The ugliness did not win. I'm about to cry at finding such a story amongst all the mean, nasty and twisted things trying to pass for stories.

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by OneShotOne06/26/13

damn fine story

Completly unexpected.

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by rudepeter09/05/13

The Best

This is the best one I have read in the 6 years I have been in here .
Thanks

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by Anonymous12/07/13

0

0

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by Anonymous03/02/15

One word.... Beautiful

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by Anonymous04/01/15

great story

I really enjoyed this story.

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by Ocker5101/04/17

Feel Good Story

I really enjoyed this story immensely, 5 stars⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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by The_Waterman01/11/17

Fabulous story

Well written. One of the best I have read on this site. 5 stars!

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by Anonymous02/28/17

VERY GOOD ENJOYED THE STORY TO BAD THE EX HUSBAN DID NOT GET HIS ASS KICKED AND HIS BALLS SHOVED UP HIS ASS.

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