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by Anonymous

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by Liar06/17/06

Compact

Almost overwhelmingly compact language. It takes focus to follow. But damn, worth it.

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by My Erotic Trail06/17/06

nice write

I enjoyed your poem (~_~)

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by Belle_Ringer06/19/06

I agree with Liar

This is incredibly compact, dense I would even call it. I will have to read it many times to realize all I want in it.

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by 07/08/06

I will be coming back to this one.

I would call it more mercury than lead--shifting sinuously from meaning to meaning, depending on the temperature of the reader.

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by Awful Arthur07/08/06

Deep

So deep that it may be bottomless. I found something new in each line every time I read it over again. At first, I thought that I was finding unintended meanings and effects but upon further readings, I think not--I'm finding very little of all that is there. I was particularly struck by the lines, "weightless tug of worth" and "dying before our berth" and the unjoined "wisp per."

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by sack07/09/06

an astonishingly good example....

of "less is more!"

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by Amyfriend02/01/07

Short, sweet....

and incredibly good.

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