by Tzara
than a ripe tomato!!
best thing to do is pluck her and take a long, deep taste;)
very well done
maria
witty-humor (~_~) I enjoyed your poem! Going for a snack now! <grin perhaps 'Candy' is available.
Very enjoyable read, but I would like a better title and a rewrite of your first stanza. The rest of the poem is quite strong.
What does, ". . . on your hips." add to the second line, or " . . . of all people" to the fourth?
Recommendation: Put away and come back with a fresh V.P.
you're not foundling cucumbers thinking about Lorca and Whitman - like old weird Al Ginsberg
ah this is a big smile from me! you make this look easy, and I certainly know it is not. well done, Tzara--
~sealace
I was doing something before I got this sudden urge to eat........ something.....
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