All Comments on 'Office Hours Ch. 01'

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satyricon.21satyricon.21almost 18 years ago
a fresh look.......

.......... at an old theme, and chock full of good writing. thanks, satyricon

BeautifulPrincessBeautifulPrincessalmost 18 years ago
Erotic

Absolutely loved the story.. the writing was wonderful, the visuals were so realistic, and the story itself I hope might continue. Fantastic job.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Hot story

Very erotic and hot story playing on one of my favorite fantasies but you made it seem plausible and natural. When I saw the overused standard "huge cock" in there I thought it would go downhill but was happy it didn't. Can't wait to see where you take them next.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Superb!

That was very hot... looking forward to reading more of your stories! Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
: )

impressive writing, hawt story. : )

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
hot

please write more of katherine and prof. smith.

viking4519viking4519over 17 years ago
WEll done

Nicely done. Thought it would be the usual prof/student story. Not. Excellent description & development. Would like to see the story develop more and unfold. One avenue would be to focus on the discomfort of each with the age difference, another perhaps with her dilemma of being in a serious relationship with someone her own age yet wanting more with the professor, perhaps the prof and his wife eventually seduce Katherine and her boyfriend ,both of whom are very reluctant at first, neither being honest with each other about the depths of their sexuality, which the prof & wife bring out.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Incredible!

Made me so hot and wet! My fantasy come true!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
damn

wow...omgosh...awesome...please write a sequel...

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
mmmmmm

made my pussy wet....tnx

lorencinolorencinoover 15 years ago
Powerful sexuality

<br>There is a powerful sexuality here that transcends the youthful longing to be taken by an experienced older lover. Where have you gone after such a brilliant start. Other stories I've read in this genre seem so lightweight compared to this. I loved the line:<br><br>

"Please," I moaned as the yawning emptiness in my cunt became unbearable. "Please. I need you..."

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
So Hot

Please write a sequel!

sgirl18sgirl18almost 13 years ago
my fantasy

That's my fantasy come true!

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