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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/23/06

Wrong Category

Not a bad story, but it isn't "interracial". Jews and Arabs have different religions, but are the same race - semites.

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by Emerald_Ari07/19/06

Nice

The motiff could have been enhanced if you had made the girl an Israeli :) And I think interracial is most appropriate, as it suggests an affair between different, and usually star-crossed people.

I didn't give it a 100 because it had no conversation at all.

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