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by bdsmbill07/07/06

Very interesting tale!

This was a good, well written story, filled with mystery and sex. Who was the guy, really? Did Chicklet send both notes? Very nicely done!

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by Anonymous05/24/11

Almost perfect!

I loved it all, except for the repeated use of "puss" instead of "pussy". That was actually quite annoying. If you changed that, it was a great first chapter and I'm off to chapter two!

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