18 yr old virgin gets raped by her father...her reaction...nothing; same 18 yr old virgin gets her anal cherry busted by her father...her reaction..."Ouch". Nothing very creative or imaginative here. Try re-writing this and giving more detailed background information and character development. Since the mother liked what the father was doing to the daughter and joined in, the reader is left with the impression that the parents devised this scenario to get their daughter.
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Anonymous07/01/06
Good First Story
Needs a little more detail. I hope you write a sequel, maybe Lacy and Tanya will get in the family way.
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Just another rape story-Worse than most
Since its father raping daughter and wife
The proper catagory would be CRAPOLA
Ouch???
18 yr old virgin gets raped by her father...her reaction...nothing; same 18 yr old virgin gets her anal cherry busted by her father...her reaction..."Ouch". Nothing very creative or imaginative here. Try re-writing this and giving more detailed background information and character development. Since the mother liked what the father was doing to the daughter and joined in, the reader is left with the impression that the parents devised this scenario to get their daughter.
Good First Story
Needs a little more detail. I hope you write a sequel, maybe Lacy and Tanya will get in the family way.
Sequel, please
Liked this one. hope you'll write a sequel
(he could "educate" his girls some more...)
yum yum
loved it hope theres more to cum soon
Horny bitches
I loved the fact that the mother got off on watching her daughter get fucked by her husband.
Eeech!
Piece of SHIT!!!
A really hot story
Mom and dad will probably have a lot of fun with their daughter, and teach her how to pleasure them both.
Her young body will give them pleasure for many years, and perhaps more children.
Thanks for the hot read
ANOTHER YET HORRIBLE RAPE STORY!
I DON'T KNOW WHAT THESE AUTHORS ARE THINKING!
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