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The Nude Gun

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by Anonymous

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by Aurora Black06/21/06

Wild!

Art, you are really something else. The image of a naked and enraged Stormy spraying bullets made me almost choke on my water! Good luck in the contest.

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by neonlyte06/22/06

Surprised

Art, your ability to come up with a surprising tale never ceases to amaze. My only real concern was setting this one in Iraq, I know it's 'make believe' but really, naked women on the streets of Iraq! Good luck.

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by MayhemLass06/27/06

that was GREAT! LOL

what a quixotic and clever story! Your fertile imagaination delights as always!

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by elfin_odalisque06/27/06

Giggling

So georgeously not politically correct. Loved it. Good luck.

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by Rumple Foreskin06/28/06

Basran humor at its best

Anyone who can come up with a humor piece based in Basra, deserves kind public comments and high votes. Good luck in the contest.

Rumple

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by Maria239406/29/06

good way to get rid of tan lines!!

MET!! I enjoyed reading your story, and the depiction of the work environment was great. we call the temp-lift here a "buck hoist", helluva way to get around, huh, rickety things!!

:D

maria

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by Selena_Kitt07/02/06

Riot!

This was a riot! Quite a wild ride... whew! "I want to shoot your gun" *grin* uh-huh... Great job, loved it, good luck in the contest. :)

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by duddle14609/28/06

Very funny!

The clash between cultures is in full swing at a building site in Iraq. The boss's wife shows up and Nude day begins. A hilarious and outrageous Read. Very Enjoyable!

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by PrettyMind03/13/16

Nice

nice !

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