All Comments on 'You're Beautiful When You're Mad'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Oh my God!

Fucking unbelievable. You had me right there in the bathroom, kitchen, living room, I felt the fury and the passion and....wow. Please write more stories, I'll be looking out for them. Delicious.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Amazing. Thank you so much for writing and sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Awesome

Your writing style makes this story so fucking sexy.

John DoeJohn Doealmost 7 years ago
This is Art

I doubt I would ever get off on this because it's written in the first-person, directed at the reader and a lesbian scene yet I'm a man (an immersion problem for me, if you will), but I'm giving it 5 stars anyway because it's just so intense and beautifully written.

Many (if not most) stories on Literotica just come across as heavily mechanical, almost as if they're script directions for nonexistent actors. But this story really gets into the the thoughts, emotions and sensations of the scene and, most importantly, the characters.

Extremely well done!

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