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don't listen to that guy...
If he was so disturbed, he should have stopped reading and moved on. I think that your story was romantic and beautiful in it's own right. Good job. Keep on writing!
I see where you are busy deleting
non-favorable comments. My score is for being ashamed of being/writing gay and trying to hide your storeisn behind another label. A warning in the first paragraph would have sufficed.
Interesting
Well written, like the character development, subtle clues that only added to the story.
Read the Title of the Story
Good Lawdy Lawdy, do none of the readers read the Titles of the Tales?
This Title suggested the outcome of the 'girl', not going for the 'snip', though not the proclivities of the guy which was also a pleasant surprise.
And the tantalising 'red herrings' scattered throughout, mention of a haircut, snip snip, and the Restaurant Bill, "A snip under ...". The red herrings were so well placed that they made me wonder about the girl really being a guy, or should i look for some other 'snip'.
and then, Bravo Bradley, the "snap" at the end.
Yours,
Kilroy.
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