A funny little write. Thanks for the read.
Well done Art! Image rich works. (check the use of the apostrophe.)
Most of the poem has good lines. A few not as good. It should be panties in the title.
I liked it the way that you put it as to gardening.
I see a few little changes but I truely understood and felt it.
I put the loving of last to the words.
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