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Teaching Sis

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by Anonymous

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by coolomon08/05/06

excellent

quite well written and to the point - gave me a hard on!

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by oldwayne06/15/08

Good tale!

Just wish there had been more.

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by Anonymous03/21/14

Ehm....

Not bad I suppose. Could use a bit of work. It was just bluntly thrown out there. The back story was too flimsy and the fact she accepted him that quickly is a bit much. It needs some finer tunings. But overall not bad.

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