All Comments on 'What Have I Done?'

While I wouldn't have picked this category, the story is well written and is worth the read.

your'e story gave me a very good cum

While I didn't like the wimpiness of the main character, the story was actually very hot! My only criticism is misspelling the word "risque" with "risky." -- WhiteKnightAR

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Lizzy

I think I read it a few years ago!

but what kind of pussy would let his cousin and grandfather fuck his girlfriend in front of him? Hell I'd have kicked her out of the house before she was able to get in the shower

This so needs a follow up. Please...

Please theres got to be a second part.

one of my fave stories on literotica ... love grandfathers taking grandson gf stories and this is the best i've read here ... love the mistaken identity as well ... hope you continue this story ... it really does offer itself a perfect continuation ... the girl needs it too ;)

keep writing, you do it well

this is a great story and I want to see more stories of guys watching old men fuck their gfs/wives

This is a hot story that gets a lot of good sex into a short amount of time. I'd love to read more about your leads and what happens to them in the future. Particularly when the real boss arrives, or if grandpa returns, possibly with a friend or two. I hope you write another episode.

WELL FOR A START YOUR WRITING IS PRITTY BAD AND ITS NOT EVEN A STORY

AND NO BOY FRIEND WOULD EVER LET SOMETHING LIKE THAT HAPPEN UNLESS SHE WAS WELL INFORMED OF IT IT WAS A TRICK THAT HE WOULD HAVE TO PAY FOR I WOULD ONLY GIVE A 2- TRY TO IMPROVE NEXT TIME IF NOT

ITS NOT GOOD READING AT ALL AND WILL PASS IT BY..................................

The author had enough guts to post a story for our enjoyment instead of criticizing there writing skill devote time to a dictionary to correct yourself. To the author well done and would love to see more from you with this series. Thank you for the enjoyment of your writing.

I want this to continue! Give us more :)

amazing please continue with part 2

Great story. Please don't pay attention to the comments on here by people who haven't got the intelligence to write their own story.

Even in porn standard this is pathetic and ridiculous story.

Just plain stupid and sad. Really, this gets you going? Just more pathetic material for the Cuck and slut crowd. Ridiculous

Grandpa shpuld have hos ass kicked and his nuts ruptured. Girfriend should be publicy humiliated and her parents should be told who took her verginity.

does she care?

At this point she probably doesn't care, as long as grandpa keeps cumming back.