All Comments on 'Equal Shares Ch. 02'

second chapter...look forward to reading on and hopefully soon*smile*...for your first attempt you've done amazingly well...as good as you are now, i can only imagine what you will be like for a good read in a few months or so...thank you for sharing with us and i so look forward to reading on...again *smile*...respectfully fan in Texas naynay

I love your take on this storyline as it is very well done. You have done a very good job delving into some people lost in self pity and devastation combined.

I must tell you I’m so waiting for the next chapters of this story. It hits me where I live and that makes it a bit more intense to me.

Thank you for the writing and entertainment.

enjoying it as we get to know the characters better.

Well done! This chapter shows Stan becoming aware of women as women again. He "noticed" Anne and Elizabeth as attractive and graceful women. He is feeling himself let Caron go. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Nookiehunter

Stan seems to be a little slow in recovering but Denise seems quite adept at the art of seduction. Will our boy Stan finally give in and go along - or will Denise have to call in the other troops - Elizibeth and Ann. Fun Read!

but Stan's kind of a whiney little fuck isn't he? People die, they divorce bad things happen but you still have to live. Get over it bitch.