All Comments on 'Capture the Flag'

...the rest of the story? You didn't really mean to end it like that, did you? I was just getting interested. And where's the promised kidnap? What a tease!

More more! It's just starting to get to the really good parts...love the lead up, and your descriptiveness.

but where's the rest?

I want more.

Gimme more.

Right now!

Sigh. Let me know through the feedback system when the next chapter is up. Please?

O, posted in 06, i guess it won't come up :(

I want to know what happens next!!!

me too! it just stops without saying what happened which is annoying because it's actually a really good story. you're a great writer but can you please finish the story?