All Comments on 'No Choice'

I enjoyed the story, but would have enjoyed a bit more character development as the story progressed, plus a little more description of the surroundings. I did like the anonymity of the men fucking the wife while hubby directed and participated, just what I enjoy. Maybe a sequel might be nice; but a story about the author would be interesting also.

Thanks for the story.

Hi CPH, nice first story, thanks! You did very well with the imagery, and captured your character's emotions well. It got me, um, interested, and I'd like to read more! And oh, ok, what the heck is a WOL?? kimosaabi9000@yahoo.com

Telling a story from a third person vantage point enables you to create more flourishes and crescendos and more imaginative fucking. A fuck for fuck sake is a lost opportunity to make it more.