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by Anonymous

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by LeBroz12/11/06

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Relationship disaster
Mistakes can't be undone
But perhaps enough penitance
Can serve as salve on those open wounds.

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by duddle14612/15/06

Once more.

Take me back ~ and try me one more time. Plaintive plea - will it be considered?

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by Amyfriend02/05/07

An excellent short piece...

that asks for atonement for guilt.

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by tazz31706/09/12

THE MISTAKES IN A RELATION

has atoning to be for all. TK U MLJ LV NV

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