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Another Wimpus Patheticus Needing Humiliationyou
Gee boboie - why bother - the self cuckolding yourself male seeking pathetic humiliation is getting so old and disgusting that we believe that either you change the base subhuman below human convention record or just go away little sick one.
No one above the wimp line can stand your constant pathetic demeaning of helpless weak men and yourself by your persistant wimpie story line. Don't you get it yet!
Even the other sites are very low scores for your sick theme. As long as you choose to offend most men and women with your helpless male humiliation theme you darken any possible regard for your obvious writing skill.
Skill is not enough anymore as there are many more talented writers and authors here garnering audience respect by their credible efforts of some reality and consequence when appropriate. Something you know but choose to avoid at most cost.
So keep shooting yourself in the ass, foot or cock as you don't matter any more except to the few jaded base sick freaks who need helpless male humiliation like you do.
Never too late to get some help bobie or is it?
another storie from that JPB sick mind noman
i wanna know how that planet Earth can allow a stupid idiot shithead may live on
this motherfucker dont know something else to write ...he is inspired from his fathers life and tell us all the stories of his mother s whore life
for sure his mother have to fuck some dogs to be impregnate with such a stupid wimp child...cos his father is to wimp to touch that whore...he is only her "others men sperm cunt cleaner"
and now...like father like son
The nature of stories
This is a S T O R Y. That means that the events did not happen. JPB wrote this S T O R Y for his own pleasure and kindly posts it for those who like his imagiantion.
I E N J O Y his S T O R I E S though I would hate to find any woman I loved in bed with someon else. Those who post stupid comments are only discouraging someone whose skill as a writer I admire greatly.
its a JPB Story
Well Bob,
This one is unrealistic, sexist, racist and sickening. But as a story its very good.
I personally don't care for the subject matter, or the wimp husband who is far to willing to take back a wife who clearly doesn't want to be in what I'd consider a "honorable" marriage.
However,
its a story, and as a story it works. The characters might be a little one-demonsional, but that's partly a product of how short the story is, and partly a function of what you were trying to write.
I'd have loved to have seen a more through exploration of the husband's history and motivations. He was a bit more forgiving than I would have imagined, and didn't seem to mind that his wife was turned on by cocks bigger than his, which I find a little unlikely, but perhaps there was something in his character you didn't cover.
Keep writing
what was he thinking
why fight to keep a whoreslut of other men as a wife.it sounds good,but who knows what she doing.the first time she fucked around and he didn't know.thinking isn't clear by the hubby.
Actually bob wrote to set some kind of a literotic
..submiccion record--
Quality or erotic content is not a factor in that contest
Your story
Your story has been reviewed on the new story review thread on the AH.
Disappointing
Writing, good. Content, poor. I understand that you are submitting stories you previously wrote for another erotic site, but come on Bob. I'm sure it took a long time to create your words then, and your efforts are appreciated, but don't you think you should rewrite some of your poorer efforts? These latest ones are so far out there compared to what you were posting.
Gee bobie - see you do have some wimp support
To the comments:
For UK, no surprise for your support but its more than a story - its bobie's predilection - he lives for helpless male humiliation as a constant.
bobie writes for himself and graciously shares - but only with and for the freaks into pathetic helpless male humiliation - he can't change the record.
Skill schmill - any asshole can demean men and women - that doesn't make him special - just numbly sick and hung up on self cuckstering humself - then drinking as much cock cum as he can swallow.
You sunk yourself bobie - so suck on to your own singular pleasure but only with support from a few like yourself. The other 99.9% of men and women value self respect over your pathetic sick ways.
Interesting
This is the first story of yours that I have read. I liked it, a little different than most.
Bullshit
You are a sick motherfucker.
Hey Dumbass
Bullshit Bob...lighten up....your neurosis is getting worse
Can't buy it!!
I don't believe that what he and Judy set up would work. Why did Aime suddenly give in again? And two wrongs never make things right.
So, NO, I can't buy the proposed fact that it solved their marriage problem, her cock loving problem.
Thatw as poor andf bad and even sick. The bitch is
nigger loving whore and you tyook her back. You're a sad wimp.
Another ARGEE variation
Is this a variation on ARGEE's "How it Really Happened?"
Wish it Was My Wife
Would I love to have sloppy seconds after my wife's pussy was filled full by a big cock.
Good but you have written better
A pretty good story with what I would consider a happy ending. I think that it is a shame that many think that love can not withstand mistakes. Here we have a story of love conquering what for some would be an unforgivable slip by the one they love. Life will usually throw us a curve ball every once in awhile. We often have to adjust to changing events just to try and keep what we hold dear to us. Sometimes it is a shitty job just to feed the family, bailing your kids out of jail even when you know they broke the law, or taking your life mate back after they stumble and break your heart. Life is mostly lived in the gray area and very seldom does it stray into pure black or white.
Fallen Angel
This one was BAD, JPB
I'm giving you a 50 for creativity, but you may have well had a unicorn screw her for plot believability.
this one was REAL bad Bob
Why do you write these wimp husband stories. No man that goes and fucks his wife after she has had multiple cocks is a real man. he is just a queer by proxie...maybe a real queer..
They're right Bob this one is fucked up beyond
belief. No man would take his whore wife back when she did what this bitch did. Wake up your fucking brits are out of your fucking brains.
Among the best I've read here!!
Just ignore the KKK guys as they are dumb shits anyway! As a husband of a blonde wife I often dream of enticing her to try a black man which she takes as a 'middle-aged crisis'in my thinking. Sometimes however when in heat and a bit tipsy she moans a little more during our love making when I whisper how two black in the bed could please her even more!
Great writing my man!!1
Fucking crock of shit.
Everything ok is it? With this soft-cock and his whoring wife? Curiosity about the cliched black cock? What a fucking drag. Excusing the wifes sluttish behaviour by saying what, is her curiosity sated? JPB, you write so much of this type of bullshit, that it appears to surround and consume your life. If this is the case, dude, either move out of the hole you live in or just find God or something. You've really got to get yourself a new hobby.
Awful fiction
Heh. In one swell foop, the master of cuckolded wimps disproves the long-held urban myth that "once you've had black, you don't go back." Well done, JPB.
hubby is a wimp
u hear the saying "once u go black u never go back", this isnt right, the real truth is "once u go black u cant go back" and thats cause no real man would want u, only the wimpy ones like this hubby
Hell No
Well written but, if you think it through she had wanted all along to see and then have an excue to fuck a black cock. Did she love her husband...yes, but not enough or respect for their marriage to abstain. She left guilty, not because she felt guilty but because she knew she was guilty of justifying her experience and then not once more but two times more.
Had she sat down with him and told him of her overwhelming desire to find out about black cocks (he should have guessed anyway) they might have worked out a one 2-3 hours fuck fest in their own homw. Give me a break, asking Judy, over and over, to talk about it and staying too long to see a black one, she knew, she just used alcohol as a justification.
I didn't like the way he decided to accept her back, but, I understood his love for her. The first time they got in a tizzy and she muttered Turone, I would have had her ass out the door, she wasn't the woman he originally fell in love with anyway and now she would ,ost likely use any excuse to get a black quickee. You know damn well she liked it and got hooked.
That is not how women react.
Her husband didn't know and she would not tell him. Therefore, unless she was afraid her husband would find out, she would not feel guilty. She would not leave him.
Women have been doing sneaky sex for millions of years so it is part of their makeup to not feel guilty unless the mate finds out.
Worst story ever, anywhere!
Just wish this website had 0 stars, something worse than hate.
another JPB WACC story
like I said before that you either love him or hate him. this one I hated
one star for the cuckold wimp
I know that this is your favorite kind of story, but it still enrages me. he should have fucked Julie and then walked away.
the first thing you do is take pics of the men so you can id them later. then in a year or so you find them, taser them, cut their cocks off. a few years after that you drug your sister in law and shoot her full of aids. as for you pretend wife, you sell her ass on the street and make a few busks off the whore before you shoot her up with aids too.
Not my cup of tea!
Didn't enjoy it at all. Wife needed to keep her curiosity under control. Gang banging a large group of miscellaneous unknown men was disease risky and a stupid thing for a married woman to do if she had any respect for herself or her husband. She might as well have simply filed for divorce before satisfying her itch and curiousity. Not a good one, JPD! Dan
Written well but didn't enjoy
I hate stories like this that are written well but have what I consider shitty plots and endings.
good story
mechanics where nice, but lost the logic of it.
What
5 years and they are monogamous but when they have a disagreement she yhreatens to call Tyrone...WTF - throw her ass out...PERIOD!!!
nice
2nd read, understandable, understood wife's anxiety, and curiosity, but would have found a way to get even for that wonderful friend judy, once and for all, before she wrecks some other friends marriage.
COCK A DOODLE DO
whose cock will do. TK U MLJ LV NV
Should Have Dumped Her Ass
'Nuff said!
One slut plus one slut always equals two whores.
Forget taking her back. She's just going to throw it in your face (like she did) when she gets mad and you know what they say - "When you go black, you never go back". Which means Judy will talk her into cheating somewhere down the line. Aimee is just another cheating slut in a long line of JPB's cheating slut. Kick her to the curb. Who needs the grief?
Love?
Can you really be that stupid?
hmmmm
It is rather obvious from the way you wrote the story that this wife did not love her husband.
Someone in love doesnt repeatedly have gangbangs. Including one after just leaving him over her guilt at cheating in the first place.
You wrote the husband as a fool, she is a serial cheater now.
No man would take her back.
This just didn't sound right.
Pure vomit
Yuk.
LOL!
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