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Great Kink!
I like the story and the way you are twisting it. You have good ideas that translate well into very stimulating stories although I'm afraid the brother will drop from over use one day. :-)
Keep your editorial eye on word use. You used through for threw, and one other homonyn that I can't remember.
Great job!
Quick Entertainment?
Here I thought Literotica was mostly good for quick entertainment... I went ahead and read all four parts here in one sitting, and now you'll have me coming back for more. I wish that there were already another four parts written, but I suppose good things will come to those who wait. Keep it up.
Keep it coming
Kind of too short, but still kind of glad you stopped when you did. Keep us hanging on for the next chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Keep them coming!
Baribrother
Teasing Bitch!
Great story but for God's Sake, Fuck the bitches already, have him make them his, not the other way around---ARGH!
Evil little smile
A teasing bitch? Me? Where on Earth did you get that from?
5*****
Still reading.
Oh my God
So fucking hot!
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