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Fun In The Pool

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by Anonymous

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by joseph69107/02/06

Pool paly time

Excellent story and I can relate, I have an outdoor pool and late night swims are excellent, always swim in the buff and lots of fun happening. Again exellent story

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by gdavis07/08/06

good story

like the setting and circumstance, has a natural beginning. The dialogue is a little too blunt though.

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by Anonymous09/18/06

Great story...

...but when are you going to continue it? I want to see how the story DIDN'T end there!

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