All Comments on 'My Wife, My Mistress'

Not too badly written but not believable. Because the guy is masturbating to pics of his wife's friend, it does not mean he cheated. So why does she get to? He should just leave. She wears a hot outfit and looks stern so he is dominated? The story is much too short. There needs to be some development of the characters so it might then be plausible that the guy would be subservient to his wife, permit her to cuckold him, etc. Maybe if he had a chastity belt?

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What you wrote was way too short on character development. You give no sense of why the husband would put up with her domination and infidelity. His actions was just fantasy, hers was a betrayal.

What we have here?????

just another stupid idiot wimp that tell us the storie of his real life with his whorewife or maybe the storie of his father with his slut mother...dont know but it is so sick that i throw my dinner

the garden of GOD is full of idiots and they find that site to write their stupidities and sick fantasies

if you dont write anymore be sure you dont upset any readers

Good start now lets have more character development so we can

enjoy his descent

she should stay gone. You should have been a man then.

O I caught you looking at pics. Now I am going to just bang men to get even and then he does nothing. Escalation from 0 to 100 in the blink of an eye. Stupid story and you would just walk away at that point. But nope not in someones poorly written fantasy they have to share as a story.