I'm not sure why I read JPB's stories. Usually they are like this one. A wife who is an unapologetic round-heeled slut and a husband who sees his marriage as something much less than it should be.
But, I have to admit that JPB is a good story writer. If very one-demonsional.
JPB, this story isn't your best. Your hero doesn't seem to have much emotion or personality. You really need to build him up a bit more and give us a better feel of who and what he is. You present us with an extremely greedy idiot who doesn't seem to care about anyone or anything other than taking his wifes parents.
Also you have a an annoying habit of making the wifes "nymphomaniac" without giving us much else about them. Why is she like that? Why didn't see talk to her husband? How does she seperate "love" and "sex"
And of course the big one. Why does the husband believe her at the end?
Keep writing, but don't expect many 100 ratings from me. I admire your ability, but just don't enjoy the theme in too many of your stories
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Anonymous07/03/06
Funny
There is not redeemable character in the story--not even the father. Yet it works--talk about agendas. Great Story! The end really had me laughing.
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07/03/06
Somehow ...
I think you worked a bit of a morality tale into this story. Now if I could just figure out what it is!
I agree with a couple of the comments: this story worked surprisingly well.
Some of Bob's more recent stories have not struck the right chord with me but this one was a genuine delight, worthy of a Biblical parable about Greed, its consequences and cost. There was enough duplicity, double-dealing and treachery to keep the tabloids busy for... oh, at least a column or two.
The quality I appreciate most about this, and certain of Bob's other recent work is, the irony of the outcome is killer-funny - in a genre (marital infidelity) that is anything but. We have all read stories about betrayal and horrific revenge. They may be initially satisfying, but ultimately leave us all a little colder. If we can lighten up a little from time to time, we might all be better off.
I have seen blockbuster Hollywood comedies based on much flimsier premises.
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Anonymous07/03/06
I dont get it
he married her for the money. he was waiting for her parents demise before devorcing half her millions. the money is good, but why stay w/ her? a couple of a million dollars isnt a bad deal. he can live well w/ that. now, the deal w/ the father, that means he has to stay w/ her for the rest of his life(shudders). she can give him AIDS before he can collect or enjoy his money. why not collect now, and enjoy life while he is still young.
the logic of this story verge on stupidity. having a couple of millions to waste as he wants is a fantasy. staying w/ her forever, that's not a fantasy, that's a nightmare. i guess, he can pray that she wont give him AIDS.
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Anonymous07/03/06
A Rerun & Like Deja Vu All Over Again
I'm Sorry but is it erotic to stay with a whore who is cuckolding you on your honeymoon???
Is it erotic to be so helpless that you know you are a cuckold many times over but don't say anything ever - well until years later when provoked by daddie in law's intend to sweep him away?
Is it arousing or basely sick to then agree to be her pimp and scheduler in waiting while she fucks anything that moves thereby helplessly cuckolding yourself for the male humiliation forevermore???
Jeez you have more of a sick following then I thought bobie.
For them you need to get back to the wife whore cunt sucking of cock cum before they lose interest in you.
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Anonymous07/03/06
who the biggest whore him or her
her hunger for fucking or his for money,who is the biggest whore.your true men can go for this type of woman,because the man in him want let her do it to him.this story females eat up and wimpy men.men who want to be piss on with mental problems love your stories.
AN EROTIC STORY ON A EROTIC STORY SITE. AND ALL THESE ANONYMOUS MUTTS PICKING APART THE SINS OF GREED AND LUST... WHAT WERE YOU EXPECTING "GONE WITH THE WIND"???
WE LOVE YOU BOBBY. HOPE YOU KEEP PISSING THESE FOOLS OFF
One of Bob's best yet. I laughed out loud at the end. This guy had no illusions; he was in it for the money. The only complaint I have is that the party scene was a little short, and could have used some detail. But this was a funny story, told in an ironic tone, and the funniest part are all the trolls who actually took it seriously.
Bob:
Once again the rabid meat beating self righteous trogs are on your ass. Here you tell a tale of a man who thinks with his big head for change and they are all over you. Pimple-faced wire-whippers, you can't have it both ways. You bitch when the hero's dick gets him in trouble and now you're bitching because good old greed overcomes lust and love. Well Done Bob. Thank You. Ronnie W.
You liked the show, eventhough you wouldn't want to hang out with any of 'em!
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Anonymous12/19/06
What a Great Piece of Fiction!!
Aside from the fact that I don't usually go for the type of story where the hub has to "allow" the wife(she's never what you could call a wife)perfect freedom or lose it all, this wasn't bad! The father in law who was behind the push to ruin the "marriage" got his, and to the satisfaction of the hub! And the "wife" "submitted"(wellll, sort of...) and alls ended well. Sort of!
I gotta admit that I loved the hubby's character. He's an absolute scumwad who lives in a world of excrement but manages to float to the top. They all get their just rewards in this LW tale. Thank you, JPB, for a walk on the "wild" side. :)
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Anonymous12/20/07
don't know
pro or con ? He was staying for revenge and money, but knowing that she has so much sex behind his back didn't bother him too much since he continued fucking her too. So staying, now he has this financial agreement secured, in fact makes not much of a difference. G.Belgium
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Anonymous03/30/08
what price money?
he puts up the behavior and attirude from her for how long, for how much?
at least he should fill the void, with a mistress(es).
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Anonymous11/20/08
a better man than i
love does have its limits
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Anonymous12/02/08
sorry I cant identify with this in any way. Were
it some of my own I would consider mercy killings.
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Anonymous03/24/09
love?
she was delusional, love? and his feelings could not be that string with her chain of lovers
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Anonymous03/26/09
Ick
Another story where the wife is little more than a whore...and somehow I just never found whores very erotic.
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Anonymous09/28/09
Oh come on!
Everybody needs someone to love! The Blues Brothers said it so it must be true... even a whore.
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Anonymous09/29/09
let him play too
equal opportunity to play for both. would that bother her? if so , so what
Was there a single one of them that had any redeemable qualities? I mean the Father, the wife and the husband - not a good person with good intents between them. I guess they all deserved one another. Funny story. I wonder who will crack first when she has a black baby? That event should trigger an explosion somewhere!
see now this was a believable cuck JPB story. I dont see any guy becoming a cuckold unless he somehow benifited from it-- in this guys case, money.
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Anonymous11/09/14
bob writes some sick nigger shit sometimes.
Fuck you bob.
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Anonymous02/22/15
Jesus that was some bad, nasty shit
What is he going to do? Wear a giant condom every time he wants to screw his own wife? Even if she's careful and she's not, she risks getting some nasty disease. And it sounds like she's risking her life and his life a lot! I'm not sure how he's going to live like that for years and years. Maybe knock her up and keep her knocked up and she won't have as much time to screw around. And how is he going to explain the money he's getting from dear old dad? Is he going to keep on working? SO many questions Bob, so many.....
English
A reader rewarded
A great story in JPB's best style. Put that up your arses wimp hating wimps!
not my cup of tea
I'm not sure why I read JPB's stories. Usually they are like this one. A wife who is an unapologetic round-heeled slut and a husband who sees his marriage as something much less than it should be.
But, I have to admit that JPB is a good story writer. If very one-demonsional.
JPB, this story isn't your best. Your hero doesn't seem to have much emotion or personality. You really need to build him up a bit more and give us a better feel of who and what he is. You present us with an extremely greedy idiot who doesn't seem to care about anyone or anything other than taking his wifes parents.
Also you have a an annoying habit of making the wifes "nymphomaniac" without giving us much else about them. Why is she like that? Why didn't see talk to her husband? How does she seperate "love" and "sex"
And of course the big one. Why does the husband believe her at the end?
Keep writing, but don't expect many 100 ratings from me. I admire your ability, but just don't enjoy the theme in too many of your stories
Funny
There is not redeemable character in the story--not even the father. Yet it works--talk about agendas. Great Story! The end really had me laughing.
Somehow ...
I think you worked a bit of a morality tale into this story. Now if I could just figure out what it is!
I agree with a couple of the comments: this story worked surprisingly well.
Keep doing what you want, Bob!
Regards, DJ
Bullshit
The most useless piece of shit in this piss-poor story is the writer.
BRILLIANT
What else is there to say about this story but brilliant one of your finest
A Duplicitous Delight
Some of Bob's more recent stories have not struck the right chord with me but this one was a genuine delight, worthy of a Biblical parable about Greed, its consequences and cost. There was enough duplicity, double-dealing and treachery to keep the tabloids busy for... oh, at least a column or two.
The quality I appreciate most about this, and certain of Bob's other recent work is, the irony of the outcome is killer-funny - in a genre (marital infidelity) that is anything but. We have all read stories about betrayal and horrific revenge. They may be initially satisfying, but ultimately leave us all a little colder. If we can lighten up a little from time to time, we might all be better off.
I have seen blockbuster Hollywood comedies based on much flimsier premises.
I dont get it
he married her for the money. he was waiting for her parents demise before devorcing half her millions. the money is good, but why stay w/ her? a couple of a million dollars isnt a bad deal. he can live well w/ that. now, the deal w/ the father, that means he has to stay w/ her for the rest of his life(shudders). she can give him AIDS before he can collect or enjoy his money. why not collect now, and enjoy life while he is still young.
the logic of this story verge on stupidity. having a couple of millions to waste as he wants is a fantasy. staying w/ her forever, that's not a fantasy, that's a nightmare. i guess, he can pray that she wont give him AIDS.
A Rerun & Like Deja Vu All Over Again
I'm Sorry but is it erotic to stay with a whore who is cuckolding you on your honeymoon???
Is it erotic to be so helpless that you know you are a cuckold many times over but don't say anything ever - well until years later when provoked by daddie in law's intend to sweep him away?
Is it arousing or basely sick to then agree to be her pimp and scheduler in waiting while she fucks anything that moves thereby helplessly cuckolding yourself for the male humiliation forevermore???
Jeez you have more of a sick following then I thought bobie.
For them you need to get back to the wife whore cunt sucking of cock cum before they lose interest in you.
who the biggest whore him or her
her hunger for fucking or his for money,who is the biggest whore.your true men can go for this type of woman,because the man in him want let her do it to him.this story females eat up and wimpy men.men who want to be piss on with mental problems love your stories.
DONT YOU JUST LOVE IT...
AN EROTIC STORY ON A EROTIC STORY SITE. AND ALL THESE ANONYMOUS MUTTS PICKING APART THE SINS OF GREED AND LUST... WHAT WERE YOU EXPECTING "GONE WITH THE WIND"???
WE LOVE YOU BOBBY. HOPE YOU KEEP PISSING THESE FOOLS OFF
I loved it!
One of Bob's best yet. I laughed out loud at the end. This guy had no illusions; he was in it for the money. The only complaint I have is that the party scene was a little short, and could have used some detail. But this was a funny story, told in an ironic tone, and the funniest part are all the trolls who actually took it seriously.
Congratulations
Bob:
Once again the rabid meat beating self righteous trogs are on your ass. Here you tell a tale of a man who thinks with his big head for change and they are all over you. Pimple-faced wire-whippers, you can't have it both ways. You bitch when the hero's dick gets him in trouble and now you're bitching because good old greed overcomes lust and love. Well Done Bob. Thank You. Ronnie W.
Kinda reminds me of "Seinfeld"
You liked the show, eventhough you wouldn't want to hang out with any of 'em!
What a Great Piece of Fiction!!
Aside from the fact that I don't usually go for the type of story where the hub has to "allow" the wife(she's never what you could call a wife)perfect freedom or lose it all, this wasn't bad! The father in law who was behind the push to ruin the "marriage" got his, and to the satisfaction of the hub! And the "wife" "submitted"(wellll, sort of...) and alls ended well. Sort of!
Made me snort and cackle more than once
I gotta admit that I loved the hubby's character. He's an absolute scumwad who lives in a world of excrement but manages to float to the top. They all get their just rewards in this LW tale. Thank you, JPB, for a walk on the "wild" side. :)
don't know
pro or con ? He was staying for revenge and money, but knowing that she has so much sex behind his back didn't bother him too much since he continued fucking her too. So staying, now he has this financial agreement secured, in fact makes not much of a difference. G.Belgium
what price money?
he puts up the behavior and attirude from her for how long, for how much?
at least he should fill the void, with a mistress(es).
a better man than i
love does have its limits
sorry I cant identify with this in any way. Were
it some of my own I would consider mercy killings.
love?
she was delusional, love? and his feelings could not be that string with her chain of lovers
Ick
Another story where the wife is little more than a whore...and somehow I just never found whores very erotic.
Oh come on!
Everybody needs someone to love! The Blues Brothers said it so it must be true... even a whore.
let him play too
equal opportunity to play for both. would that bother her? if so , so what
Classic JPB
This has all the elements of JPB stories, LOL loved the twists and reveal's. Keep up the good work.
Ewww...
No doubt about it, his pecker will end up dropping off like Quentin Tarantino's character in Planet Terror. *Drip...Splat* Gone...
What a group of idiots!
Was there a single one of them that had any redeemable qualities? I mean the Father, the wife and the husband - not a good person with good intents between them. I guess they all deserved one another. Funny story. I wonder who will crack first when she has a black baby? That event should trigger an explosion somewhere!
Sweet Jesus!! This is so way over the top and hilarious.
JPB really got me on this one. I'm not a fan of cuck stories but this was absolutely a riot. Thanks for the entertainment! !!!
HOW MUCH RESPECT CAN MONEY BY
and for how long? TK U MLJ LV NV
believable story
see now this was a believable cuck JPB story. I dont see any guy becoming a cuckold unless he somehow benifited from it-- in this guys case, money.
bob writes some sick nigger shit sometimes.
Fuck you bob.
Jesus that was some bad, nasty shit
What is he going to do? Wear a giant condom every time he wants to screw his own wife? Even if she's careful and she's not, she risks getting some nasty disease. And it sounds like she's risking her life and his life a lot! I'm not sure how he's going to live like that for years and years. Maybe knock her up and keep her knocked up and she won't have as much time to screw around. And how is he going to explain the money he's getting from dear old dad? Is he going to keep on working? SO many questions Bob, so many.....
Who cares if she fucks everyone
He's financially set for life and gets all the mind blowing sex he can handle. Fuck I'd stay! Shit I believe she does love him. crazy!
I hate cheaters, BUT I liked this one. and yes money makes it all better!
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