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by dorksicle

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
best poem

of the day in my opinion. Your imagery is great, esp in the first stanza:

'Late night, spiders whisper "Don't start, no,

don't dream. Not tonight."

They are wise, widows aware that

stardust is just soul ashes.'

This is simply awesome

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Becoming life's shooting star, spreading your self out amongst the firmament.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
ON DEATHS BEDi

is not careless, only life. TK U MLJ LV NV

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