All Comments on 'The Making of a Flower'

Wonderful. I would have prefered more detail, but you did a nice slow build up.

I almost felt as though I was a voyeur, but alas, only in my dreams.

Keep writing!

Mmmmmm!

one of the best stories i have read on here.

PT79

Very good first story. You show you have some writing talent. Can't wait to read more from you. One thing I would say is write more detailed descriptions of what is going on. Otherwise, it was a great story.

I would have liked a bit more detail as well, but the build up was very sweet and totally hot. I will be watching this author closely. A very good first effort...

Sex scenes are nice and hot, but character development is woefully underdeveloped. Neither of the two lovers are more than sketch figures. Everybody has a history and multiple events and influences in their lives, but the two lovers here come from a very shadowy background, and we never really get to know them.

Good connection; don't stop creating more adventures in the delight of your lust!

You did a very nice job on your first story.

I can not wait to read the next chapter.

Hope you are having fun trying to share your thoughts with us.

You are very cute young woman too......your picture is very nice.

awesome Audrey. can't wait to read the rest :)