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by Anonymous07/03/06

Get an editor

25 for trying--get an editor. You might have a story here, but it was rather hard to tell.

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by Anonymous07/04/06

Writing is not simply typing

This story, if that's what it is, is almost impossible to read. Long run-on sentences, convoluted structure. and a host of other problems simply render it useless.

I can NOT believe a person can be this unaware of how bad his/her writing skills are. Please consider getting an editor, or, failing that, English Comp remediation.

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by Anonymous07/04/06

Oh! WOW!

Yer wreting is greattt. Wrete some more. Don't worree about these readers that clitisize. You is really great!

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