All Comments on 'Epicurean'

by Selena_Kitt

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don87654don87654over 17 years ago
Disappointing

Any body can "want". What a waste of reading time! Nude beaches and nudist camps are all the same, but if you want something you also have to go after it most of the time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Alternative Title: Curse of being a man :-D

Yes Selena you've captured it - I'm not sure how, but you did it. The constant looking and lusting; the wanting of every fit female you see; the desire and arousal; the continous pictures of fucking (all of them!!) in your head; so many woman and just one cock. However, it will never happen, it is just a series fleeting fantasies, and reality (the wife and children he adores) returns. Yes that is what it is like to be a man. Not bad for not being a penis owner! :p

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Secret Manual?

Who gave you the secret guy manual? Do you know the handshake? Damn, selena, that was right on. That part of a man is always there, the wolf you called it, hunting, prowling. Its not just the sexual predators who have that lust, its regular guys too. That was our secret! How'd you figure it out? Great piece, really erotic, sexy, got me hard, ok, I admit it, ya damn woman!

satyricon.21satyricon.21over 17 years ago
Great writing, but...

...somehow it didn't engage me. it's got to get 100, for technical quality alone, and the guy's thoughts are pretty close to the real politically incorrect thing,(though most wolves i know tend to skip the cerebral part of the loop). maybe it's the setting: all the nude beaches i've been on have been strangely domestic and non-sexual. my wolf howls more at a fully clad woman accidentally letting her own inner animal be noticed. that said, i'm going to read this a couple more times. Thanks

Black TulipBlack Tulipover 17 years ago
Entertaining

story you got there.

I enjoyed reading it. Not sure if you aimed for it, but in my opinion it could just as easily be labelled as humor.

I know the would-be neutrality of nude beaches. LOL

Glad to find out there are some guys who do look!

:))

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
That was an intense look into

the mind of a sex addict. It reminds me a little of when I write serial killer scenes and suddenly it just seems to be right there, did this write easily for you? I'm impressed.

Alicia Night OrchidAlicia Night Orchidover 17 years ago
Lovely writing

I loved the concept, the writing, and the build-up. I also thought you made the most of the theme. Great job.

PatPowersPatPowersover 17 years ago
U

I concur: Who gave you a copy of the secret guy manual? The miscreant must be hunted down and destroyed at once!

However, you weren't QUITE on the money. Your story missed what I think is one of the most essential elements of the male interest in female flesh -- but hey, I have a story of my own to write here ... hmmm ...

sacksackover 17 years ago
the crudeness of the language

draws you in immediately, and afterwards the skill of the writer keeps you breathless! Great job, and I hope this places in the contest!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Very Daring!

It was brave of you to write from a male POV, esp a very internalized story rather than a simple action dricven stroker. But it works. Left me wanting to know more about the daughter though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Excellent

I've been to a few nudist beaches and like you I just love to see naked pussy, bald, trimmed, hairy young or old...I love them all. I also love the thought of these ladies looking at my hard cock

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Wow

What an incredibly fresh SUPER VOYEUR feast. Really different and mind fucking great !

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