All Comments on 'Awakening Lust Ch. 02'

why in the hell after all that they stop.how old are you.

if you don't want this kind of beating around the bush stories, and want the 5-minute-in-the-bar-and-we're fucking each other to death in a motel room stories, there are plenty of those around; in fact, at least 90 percent of the stories in Lit. is of that nature; and frankly, they are the most boring!

this kind of dirty, blatant, and yet controlled "teasing" is what makes a story worth reading: you don't really know whether they will really have full intercourse; they seem to be heading that direction, but it can change any second by one of the players, etc.

excellent, author. a bit too short, but otherwise, it is the most sensible direction, as I'm quite tired of the stories where the starting sentences describe one or two penises going in and out of a vagina and the last sentences are also the same thing ---- such are too predition and boring. you have the balanced "formula"; don't change it, despite the "frustration" some readers may have over it! LOL

Please continue this story. Forget that other guys comment about this story beaing bad. I loved this and the the first story. Please let the relationship continue between the mother and son. This a really hot story

This story is great because it is abrupt, and i am going to be dissapointed if this is the last story, can we ignore his last comment and keep it going?

Go back to school.

excellent!! please continue....

That was awsome! Don't listen to any others continue this story its fucking hott!

both stories turned me on incredibly, come up with a third story soon.

Just found these stories. You might only have written two stories, but both were good. I just hope the idiot comments did not put you off.

shit hole

i was sad to here that was the end you could have made it go onn like when your dad left town the next timeyou could pick it up by saying so you thought it was over and continue with more fun like how she caught you peeking at her or she catches you sniffing her pantys after your dad was gon out of town hope to see more from you on this storyi enjoyed reading it and want to here more thanks

That was no way to end a story, you can't just get us started then shut down. It's been 7 years, Just a 2 part wonder. ......thanks for nothing...... .................................LAROC OF AGES

The two installments were excellent, the boy was getting real hard around his mother, mom saw what was happening in her boy's pants, and her motherly cunt got real wet. So far, so good. But, look, marshy, you're a guy around 30 years old, I'm sure your fine fat prick was hard when you wrote these stories, maybe you even shot a load at the end. Have you no mercy on your devoted fans? We want to see your hero stick his big prick up his mother's mommy-hole and blow his young balls up his own mother's cunt. Is that too much to ask? We know his young sperm belongs up his mommy's cunt, big, big doses of his sperm flooding her twat to overflowing. Why don't you tell us how that happens?

Great follow up, nice to read that you shave your pubes, so do I it's a great feeling and it makes my cock look bigger than the 3" stubby spunk machine that it is. Get your cock inside her in the next story and pump her full of spunk, if not in her pussy then shoot it up her arse. She'd love that and so would we. Keep the stories short and sweet, get to the sex as soon as, it makes for great reading, and gets us hard and wanking very quickly. Can't wait to shoot my next load at your mum's expense.

He hides from her, stays out till after midnight, rejects her when she opens the door, and then slams it shut, forever?

What is wrong with him?

I loved your stories and need chapter 3. What will she do next? Will he take the initiative and go to her room?

I have several comments from those who have not posted a story themselves. They seem to be jerks who just want to put you down. Ignore them.

God! its so horney... love the Mother & son stories, what better than each other, so safe, so honest, we should all try it

Nigga dah was hot... Buh der gata b ah part3

both chapters are so...undescriptive

ur mom shouldnt hv to cheat u. she should hv given completely to u. or u should hv tasted her. not brave enough

DAMN

Very good second chapter

Made me nice and hard and a little wet

It was great as far as it went,but to think they did a 69 and stopped there and never did anymore was very dissapointing...their desire was too exciting to stop there !!

I remember licking my aunt's pusssy .. Cum gushing pussy

Part Three please.

Series continue?...Wonderfully written so far...

Love incest i think it’s so speacial anyone interested in sharing their own story you can email me on dammam.massage@gmail.com

You could have had him fuck her ,then THE END.keep writing you will get better.........thanks

Great beginning. Terrible end! It just can't stop when it's getting good....

I was hoping for a continuation of this HOT set...

Once again, rushed and needing edited.

Even though this story is about 15 years old, the writer shouldn't have stopped until Andy had fucked his mother. Never leave your work unfinished.