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by vampiredust06/30/06

This is nuts

and I conclude that you must be nuts as well. Seriously, though, this is a hyperkinetic poem which was probably written by someone with too much caffeine.

Thanks for the read, mentioned in today's new poem reviews

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by lobomao06/30/06

el lobomao loves this poem

Across the table of comments
I see your thousand mile stare
Not at me but at the island no man is
And how you freestyle frolic there
Having had the haves I had
Looking now to throw them all away
I wish I could beach back coconut roll
Catch a breathe of your clock kilter knitting
To live life back another day

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by Anonymous06/30/06

Wild ride

I like the new language you've invented. I understood it! Scary. Some good imagery here.

Tess

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