All Comments on 'A Bottle of Poetry'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
this

inspired a high haiku river pen for you...nicely penned I like the flow and the message rocks the waves in the night...big sigh...blue

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
You

record the poets' journey well, MET. I liked the imagery you've put in, esp details such as 'I write

glass words, reflective and transparent'

such sublime images

Thanks for the lovely read, mentioned in today's new poem reviews

MayhemLassMayhemLassalmost 18 years ago
as usual ...

the flow and uniqueness of your pen delight..

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyalmost 18 years ago
Timeless ...

I love this one Art.

I feel a great deal of emotion

and the imagery here is breath taking.

Just a loverly write full of passion.

Very nice pen ...

bandelerobandeleroalmost 18 years ago
Lovely imagery

A really good piece of writing, conjured up some great pictures.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Nice piece of imagery here

Up to the part of the

Bottle poetry risking the

Kiss of jagged rock...

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
^

I'll raise a toast to that.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Thoughts.

Throw a bottle on the creative Sea ~ perhaps it will return with thoughts -ideas - inspiration to write. I especially was in awe of the word play in the lines below:

Castaway, marooned in my dreams

an ocean of endless possibilities.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.

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wildsweetonewildsweetoneover 17 years ago
just seen

in the archive thread and enjoyed the read.

I like the images you toss out for me,

'Cast upon an ocean of white, I write

glass words, reflective and transparent.'

such a lot to say in the first two lines.

Well done. Keep up the growth. Stretch yourself and keep your eyes open, trust me, you'll enjoy the journey.

wso

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
TIME AND NOTES IN A BOTTLE

adrift in a malestrom of travel. TK U MLJ LV NV

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