All Comments on 'The Demon'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Your Story

Has been mentioned on the New story Review Thread in teh Author's Hangout.

turtledoveturtledovealmost 17 years ago
Hot

I really enjoyed this story very much-Nice job, I can't wait to see if you write a sequel

pureabandonpureabandonover 16 years ago
awesome, imaginative

oh jesus wow. it's always a thrill to read stories (especially of this nature ;]) to have some sort of creativity to it. i beg of you to make a sequel!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Yummy!

Absolutely lovely and yummy, this story got more than a few juices flowing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Hard to follow

Needs better description of how the claws were placed and such. It became confusing to follow.

RavishingRavishingalmost 6 years ago
Enjoyable

At least while gruesome as a horror should be, it certainly also nails the erotic at the end. A nice flow from one to the other to make for an entirely interesting read. Thumbs up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Ummmmm yes. Yes yes yes. More please! 😘

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