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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/04/06

Your Story

Has been mentioned on the New story Review Thread in teh Author's Hangout.

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by turtledove05/16/07

Hot

I really enjoyed this story very much-Nice job, I can't wait to see if you write a sequel

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by pureabandon08/05/07

awesome, imaginative

oh jesus wow. it's always a thrill to read stories (especially of this nature ;]) to have some sort of creativity to it. i beg of you to make a sequel!

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by Anonymous11/07/07

Yummy!

Absolutely lovely and yummy, this story got more than a few juices flowing!

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by Anonymous12/19/10

Hard to follow

Needs better description of how the claws were placed and such. It became confusing to follow.

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