by Sammy11356
to those that commented before- you can write chickenshit comments but can you write a better story ? Nope, than fuck off! To the writter keep them cumming.
I thought it was a bit brief, but hot. I think my girlfriend, who has the same fantasy, will enjoy reading it tonight. Keep up the good work! -- WhiteKnightAR
I've done something like this except it was with a lady friend instead of the wife--Was really great to watch so many guys fuck one lady
Any gamer on this offer leave a email address I I will.check often
Reads like a plumbing manual (including soldering and pipe clean-out.)
I love watching my wife getting fondled and fucked by several guys while I watch and lick her pussy. We have even enjoyed me licking their cock and cum. If you husbands haven't tried it you should. Made me a cocksucker how about you.!!!
I like a story that gets straight into the action and this one did. Well done for writing it and take no notice of the bad reviewers.
A who to be proud of. A story that if it was on paper would be sub par toilet paper. It already has shit on it.
Dumb assed little dicked twit who's fantasies are put into the written form, completely exposing how little he understands women or his desire to die from a really nasty STD.
Adults with a 13 year olds mind should never attempt to write.