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Gen's Longest Journey Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by lostinetherland07/09/06

Feedback requested

Hi, this is my first erotic story. I have ideas on where to take this, but I would like some feedback on what you think of this chapter. Anything you especially like or dislike, want to see more of / less of? Thanks for reading anyway.

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by Saucyminx07/09/06

Very nice

I liked it. Quick read, short, hot, and to the point. Thank you L. Can't wait until the next installment.

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by LordRunes07/12/06

Loved it

You carry it well, WRITE MORE. Great Reading. Sending link to my gf she will love it.

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by Erotos07/19/06

Lovely

A good quick story straight to the point. Fine first effort.

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