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by Anonymous

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by vampiredust07/04/06

This

stanza is great:

'as the smell of all life
fills my lungs and floats
my brain beyond my skull.'

as is the rest of the poem. I loved the earthy, primeval imagery; it created such a raw atmosphere in the poem.

Great read, mentioned in today's new poem reviews

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by JustSkye07/05/06

wow

I'm glad you posted it. Just wow.

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by 05/30/07

My favorite

I needed to read this today.
Thank you Bronze.

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