All Comments on 'The Illustrated Wife'

The worst story you've written yet! Did you rush this one out! I can tell from your other stories how much love there is between you and your wife. It just doesn't show. And being and illustrated story even though the pictures are different you could have had way better ones to heat the story up! The one in your profile is way better! Not my favorite one by you at all...

Dude, you're cranking these out faster than people can read, and you're shortchanhging everyone because of it. Your stuff could be good if you gave it some time and effort!

Please don't start posting this stroke garbage. Stroke means one thing and that is the person can not write at all.

The pictures were bogus and worse than comic book goofy. This entire post was a complete disaster.

I don't like worthless whore like this wife in the story