by WFEATHER
I love it what you claim it to be, a perspective peice. I'd love to tell you should have dragged out the ethics of the situation but you said all there was to say. And you didn't give us any sex. What the fuck?
I love it, if it is a preview of things to come. I would love to see the next chapter.
ummm what the hell? these are SEX stories. these are ohh thats talk about it but never read about it XD. ok well i hope ur other stories were better b/c this was certainly lacking in the most server degree.
omg, what a fail of a story!!! this is so stupid i almost laughed. no sex, i mean what the fuck???? you should have AT LEAST put more detail into it....
I thought the story was going somewhere and then it just stoled. Why don't you finish it?
Definitely a well constructed story although doesn't seem finished
Don't listen to most of the others who want nothing more to read a never ending story with nothing but sex, sex, and more sex. Your story is rather thought-provoking. Your description was apt, and if they didn't like it they can simply go find a story that suits their needs. This was well done. However, it does feel like this would be a part of a larger piece. If so, I'd enjoy reading the rest. If not, it's still rather good.
Thought provoking and a nice teaser! I hope I find more to this because you other submissions along this line have been very good! Thank you Sir :)
I believe that this story is categorized wrongly. Since there's no actual smut in the piece, it shouldn't be under the "Non-Human" column. Even if I was led astray, I still liked the conversation.