by Softly
You had a wonderful plot, and used only a third of possibilities. You must write a sequel.
revenge is best served cold. continue on. get the judge also.
do a sequal using stars like Doris Day, June ALLISON, Jane Fonda, Janet Leigh etc. These were our stars in the past.64a
A great premise! Potential unlimited!! More detail. Demi's turn or Scarlet Johanson.
WOW - What a great story You have to do a second ,thrid ,fourth chapter- the possiblites are endless!!!!
Horny Hubby