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Finally
I like this chapter, thanks for updating.
Magic!!!
How deliciously erotic!The magic it's still there!!! Very, very well done.I will be patiently waiting, but.. please..not 52 weeks ;)
Welcome Back
Keep the chapters coming!!!!
You
cannot possibly leave it like this,the magic IS still there.To finish now would be like missing the last act of Romeo and Juliet,although I hope there is a beter ending than the star crossed lovers.Welcome back.
It's great!!!
Thank you Thank you Thank you!!!! They've definitely not lost their magic...please don't make me wait as long for the next chapter
Yay
I'm so happy to see a new chapter. This story is so wonderful, I got little butterflies in my stomach when I read this new chapter. Please continue with this story. I absolutely love it and you write it so beautifully. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Encore Encore
More More More!!! You can't leave us hanging like that! It's just not allowed.
At last!
Continue please! Chapter 6 was throbbing. Don't make us wait another year!
!!
thank you so much for updating! this story is still amazing, and i'd hate to see it end prematurely. love it!
MORE!!
no, the magic still remains......so you shud continue this wunderful story...tis amazin so dont even think of stopping!! the chapter is perfect and i hope the nxt one comes quickly!
Welcome back!!
I had to re-read the story (oh darn!) to catch me up on the last chapter! I (we all) hope to see the next submission very soon!!
Don't Stop
Oh my gosh, please continue this story. It is not only hot and romantic, but it clutches the heart. Please finish it!!!!
The enchantment hasn't gone
I really enjoyed the chapters when you posted them a year ago and have been on the look-out for a follow-up all this time. Hurray! It is here. I really loved it and I do hope you will continue this series. I'm also looking forward to any other entry you're going to submit. Keep up the very good work!
more please!
don't stop now, there's plenty of magic left!
C'est fantastique!
You have to finish the story. The characters are so brilliant, they deserve to have their story told. Please continue.
awesome
SOOO awesome. Keep 'em coming!!! This was the best one yet!!
Don't STop NOW!!!!
Please continue this story!!! It's truly AMAZING! I'm so in love with Rainey and Aidan! You just can't stop now! The magic is definitely still there! The chapter was beautifully written just as the rest of the other chapters have been. I've been waiting for this update for so long, please don't disappoint us by making this the last chapter and leaving this wonderful story unfinished!! >.
Are you CRAZY
If you stop now I think I will have to hire head hunters to get you. One thing I have learnt over the years is that even if a story is starting to wain a little, readers still need closure. Your story is NOT waining so you should definately finish it. Your fans will love you for it.
=]
CONTINUE!!!!!
Please Please Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please continue with the story. I still feel the magic between them
dont stop yet !
This is such a good story. You cant leave it like this you got to finish it! Keep up the good work x
Please Continue!
Please, more! You can't leave us hanging like this!
Finally, feels like forever waiting!
I love this story, I am soo happy that it is still continuing. Please keep on and continue with the story of aidan and rainey.
Amazing
Pleeeeeease write more :(
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you cant just leave it like that! finish it! there is deffinatly something going on between aiden and rainey and i want to find out what!
Come On!!
Come on already and give us some more!!! As someone named Raney (ok without the "i") I love this story. Please have mercy on us! Take a sick day or tell everybody you're long-time pet goldfish died and you must grieve in private and wish him well to goldfish Nirvana, but find some time to sate our curiosity.
More please!!
Oh come on! It's so good to read about those two again, please keep it up! I can't wait to see what will happen! Keep up the good work!
Continue!
Just finished reading this story and I am pleading you to finish. It was innocent and erotic at the same time. Please explore her first time sexually and dealing with love. Update as soon as you can. We need you to finish it.
Thanks!
please finish
i'm dying to know what happens...please finish!
wonderful
this is so good. i can't handle the suspense of waiting, please finish!!
PLEASE FINISH!
I think this story has great potential nad it would be a great disservice if you do not finish! please bring us more!
This is the best story I've read on this website.
Your story touched me to the core. The magic is hardly gone from Rainey and Aidan. I'd love to see what happens when they grow into their love and start a deeper relationship. If it's what you want, please continue.
More please
Please write more to this people love it! I know there is something special between those two, I cant wait to find out what!
Aidan & Rainey
I love this so much - the best story I've read on Literotica. It's lovely, please continue if you can!
PLEASE ANOTHER CHAPTER ASAP!!!!!! :"(
Please come back, I am this close to letting off my more frustruated steam!
Just kidding, but i may do if you don't continue!
Cheers and Keep it Up!!!
MORE CHAPTERS!
This has to be one of the most touching, heartfelt, yet HOTTEST stories, i've read, you have a gift please continue writing!
more please
i know it's been awhile since you posted last but this story is amazing it would be better if you added more chapters lots and lots of them :) hope you write more soon..
You should DEFINITELY continue
Yes, we still want to hear more about Aidan and Rainey!!!!
More Please!
This story is great, I just read it today. I loved it More Please!!!!!!
great story
please please continue this story.. dnt leave us hangin..
MORE!
PLEASE! I want to read more of Rainey and Aiden!
pleaseeeee continue
Come on so many of us have literally begged u to continue this story.. please please dnt leave us hanging. they make a cute couple
PLEASE POST
Please do finish the story, the characters have not lost any of their magic....please continue...like the last poster said...we're literally begging you to continue the story....:( lol
continueee
pretty pleasee with a cherry on top
LOVE IT!
I love Rainey and Aidan- please write more :)
An all nighter!
I was taken from the beginning of the story and couldn't stop reading till the end. It's taken some time but it's worth it!
Thank you for such a wondrful and romantic story. Deff gave me hope! :)
Lots of Love
Lanie
please!!!
i love this story the characters r great. please finish it i really wanan see wat happens
PLEASE!!!
Please finish the story! Don't let it just end like this!!!
thank you. now keep going!
I love how this last chapter went.
I am new to your stories, so no old and tired from me. I love your ideas and character development. It is neat to see how people transform and change as love affects them.
Please finish the story if you can convince your muse to release it to you.
you can't just leave us hanging!
I love this story!!! please finish it, its killing me not knowing!
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