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A little shy on the sex, but a nice read anyway. Keep em coming.
Well written. You seem to be a more accomplished wordsmith than most. Fun story to read. Could have been longer.
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A little shy on the sex, but a nice read anyway. Keep em coming.
Good technique
Well written. You seem to be a more accomplished wordsmith than most. Fun story to read. Could have been longer.
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