This could easily have gone into Romance... I was totally swept away by this, the turn of events, the incredible chemistry between these two--and frankly, I'm a sucker for a knight in shining armor :) This was a lovely read, Og, I can't tell you how much I enjoyed it...
The sex wasn't described very much, but I got the impression that the emphasis was more on the rescue and not on the sex. It was more of a classic "damsel in distress" tale, with a woman needing a deliverer in more than one sense. I also liked her honesty about her own folly in trying to swim in that spot. I also like that her past issues didn't keep her from enjoying the power exchange and love affair with Gary. It didn't seem to jaundice her toward men.
This is the first Og story I've read in a while, and I have to say that he did rather well this time. I'm glad that he didn't stay out of the contest, simply because he wasn't allowed to win.
Who kidnapped the real, extended format, Og and left this writer of concise, entertaining stories? :)
Good work, Og.
Rumple
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Anonymous05/01/08
:)
A most lovely tale my friend.. you seem to be involved with love, that pleases me.. To many confuses sex with love here.. You most often don't.. cheers Yoron.
So pleased in two ways. One is the story, every bit as wonderful as the other story by by you that I've read, and two because while looking over your submissions I saw that you had one with a 2013 date on it. I was so hoping you were still writing, unlike so many other authors I have enjoyed reading on here. I wanted to beg you to write a sequel to 'Hypothermia' (If you haven't already, I haven't read the complete listings of your work yet so don't know). Shameless of me I know, but I can't help it. I so loved the story that I could not believe my luck in finding it again after a long absence from reading here. I do so hope you read this and consider my request. And thank you for such a lovely story. I look forward to reading more of your work!
English
well written.....
Too bad this isn't eligible to win the contest...it's quite lovely. Congratulations on a fine piece of work anyway.
A fine story
oggbashan:
By a fine author. Well told and Thank You. Ronnie W.
It may not be your usual fare...
But that didn't stop me from thoroughly enjoying it. Great work, Og.
Swept Away!
This could easily have gone into Romance... I was totally swept away by this, the turn of events, the incredible chemistry between these two--and frankly, I'm a sucker for a knight in shining armor :) This was a lovely read, Og, I can't tell you how much I enjoyed it...
This will be mentioned on the AH.
The sex wasn't described very much, but I got the impression that the emphasis was more on the rescue and not on the sex. It was more of a classic "damsel in distress" tale, with a woman needing a deliverer in more than one sense. I also liked her honesty about her own folly in trying to swim in that spot. I also like that her past issues didn't keep her from enjoying the power exchange and love affair with Gary. It didn't seem to jaundice her toward men.
This is the first Og story I've read in a while, and I have to say that he did rather well this time. I'm glad that he didn't stay out of the contest, simply because he wasn't allowed to win.
Well done Ogg
I wish you had more time to flesh this out before the contest deadline, it is certainly the start of a good romance.
My Best wishes,
kbate
Who are you, really?
Who kidnapped the real, extended format, Og and left this writer of concise, entertaining stories? :)
Good work, Og.
Rumple
:)
A most lovely tale my friend.. you seem to be involved with love, that pleases me.. To many confuses sex with love here.. You most often don't.. cheers Yoron.
So pleased
So pleased in two ways. One is the story, every bit as wonderful as the other story by by you that I've read, and two because while looking over your submissions I saw that you had one with a 2013 date on it. I was so hoping you were still writing, unlike so many other authors I have enjoyed reading on here. I wanted to beg you to write a sequel to 'Hypothermia' (If you haven't already, I haven't read the complete listings of your work yet so don't know). Shameless of me I know, but I can't help it. I so loved the story that I could not believe my luck in finding it again after a long absence from reading here. I do so hope you read this and consider my request. And thank you for such a lovely story. I look forward to reading more of your work!
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