a good start, keep going, theres lots of material for you to work with and you seem to be a good enough artist to make something good out of the material that you have.
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Anonymous07/22/06
One Great Story
This is one great story and I look forward to the 2nd part. You are one great writer. I did cry while reading it. Not to many stories do that to me but Yours were so moving that I could not help myself.
Damned good story lead. I can't wait to see how it happens between him and his daughter. I have my own ideas, but I'll not try to influence your story. Great job!!!
you need to get going on the next segment of your story. you'll probably move and she'll need reassurance as only daddy can give. i'd love to be your daughter...i'd be needing 'reassurance' on a regular basis. spooning in bed with your hard cock pushed against my arse, your fingers buried in my pussy and you whispering in my ear all the things you are going to do to me......oh yeah....you'd be the best daddy!
keep going
a good start, keep going, theres lots of material for you to work with and you seem to be a good enough artist to make something good out of the material that you have.
One Great Story
This is one great story and I look forward to the 2nd part. You are one great writer. I did cry while reading it. Not to many stories do that to me but Yours were so moving that I could not help myself.
You know who I am.
A real tear jerker, IMHO
Damned good story lead. I can't wait to see how it happens between him and his daughter. I have my own ideas, but I'll not try to influence your story. Great job!!!
A sweet romantic story
Beautifully scripted and a pleasure to read.
I don't know.....
I found it kinda boring, i expect raw lust when i visit this site, if i want emotions i read a romance novel.
I look forward to the next chapter.
you need to get going on the next segment of your story. you'll probably move and she'll need reassurance as only daddy can give. i'd love to be your daughter...i'd be needing 'reassurance' on a regular basis. spooning in bed with your hard cock pushed against my arse, your fingers buried in my pussy and you whispering in my ear all the things you are going to do to me......oh yeah....you'd be the best daddy!
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