by M.R. Alicante
Very nice build up and teasing, I felt I was getting arouse right there with Susie. I would love to see another submission where Susie gets here revenge against the other girl.
I loved the second installment. I'd like to see more from Susie's perspective.
That was an excellent story. The build up was very good and I liked the way everything was drawn out. Susie was a greatly realized character and I found most of her reactions believable, which is hard in this kind of story. My only criticism would be that the end, when she finally got what she wanted, should have been drawn out a bit more.