Different kind of story, I liked it, reminds me of a T.V. show I love to watch called True Blood, it has this fantastic redheaded teenager named Jessica, I would let her drain me just to feel her body.
Keep writing, this was good for a short story, like to read Ch #2
Lovley Vamp
Short and sweet with added Vampires. Nice and hot. I liked it ^^
To Short
I hope it will be A ch2 but you need to make it a lot longer
Wow...
That was incredibly hot. I got unbelievably wet just reading it!!!
Need more
That was a great story. I hope there is more to come.
Different Kind of story
Different kind of story, I liked it, reminds me of a T.V. show I love to watch called True Blood, it has this fantastic redheaded teenager named Jessica, I would let her drain me just to feel her body.
Keep writing, this was good for a short story, like to read Ch #2
Nice.
Love beyond the grave.
Cool story
Very interesting and well written would love to read more
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