All Comments on 'A Wedding Day Orgy'

This is a good story. I enjoyed reading it. Some scenes were especially hot.

B O R I N G! No otha word 2 describe it!

I enjoyed this story very much, keep up the good work.

I enjoyed this story very much, keep up the good work.

Very Hot, we have similar writing styles, you might enjoy my story "The Pool Party"

I thought this was very cool. good read.

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the situation is totally hot, but you seemed to be in too big a hurry. i'm all for getting down to the action, but it seemed all jumbled and erratic. slow it down. nothing wrong with a few adjectives and adverbs. overall, kinda disappointing, but really didn't miss by much.