Pretty much the same way I went with my X. Twenty years together, then two weeks notice while our kids was at summer camp. She moved to a friend waiting for me to leave. As we had kids I leaved everything as untouched as possible when I left.. I thought that we could reconcile our differences later, but five months later another guy (workmate to her) moves in with her as his family had thrown him out. So there he was in my home with my kids my dog and cat, with my lying slut wife that had worked & fu*ed with him for f*k knows how long... You gotta give it to her... She was real smart, had she told me directly I think I might have ... But it all came in pieces and bits over half a year... Maybe they were soulmates then? As he left his kids for her.. To my eyes he must be one sorry piece of ass..My daughter told me that she (X)lives alone now so the 'soulmating' only held some years it seems... Not that I care, I wouldn't touch her with a ten foot pole anyway.. And no I haven't told the kids about it... I had a rather hard childhood myself and much of my efforts have been to make sure off them growing up safe and in the same place with friends they know of since childhood, and cared for.. And she's a good mother even if a lying slut.. But I stopped talking with her that day I found out about that guy... And sometimes I wonder if my youngest is mine or.. But heck, she destroyed my life but I don't need to take it out on the kids for some cheap revenge... Cheers Yoron.
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Anonymous04/21/08
OH MY GOD
CHARLIEBEAR you violated the most sacred tenants of Literotica when the husband walked up and barged in to the room. WIMP husbands do not do that. They shake and fume and stomp their feet and end up walking away while they dream up cutsie pie little games to catch their wives...hey the dumb ass has already caught her. He pukes about every five minutes and cries continually while he moans about his wife forsaking their most sacred and beautiful marriage. It's like it's an icon or something. Glad to see it treated as it really is...a slut wife and a farce of a marriage.marriedwithballs@yahoo.com
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Anonymous06/01/08
Dump the last line
Everything is destroyed, but maybe I'll call her????
The last line wreaked the rest of the story.
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Anonymous05/07/09
not very phil(ing) for her
her own self destructive personality aspects caught up with her, and he's away from her
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Anonymous10/06/09
Great until the last line
You had a well told story, until the last line. Why would any sane man want to get together with a back stabber like her? There are a lot more wonderful single women out there than good men. Thanks
I hate fucking wimps and was so glad I didn't find one here. Five Stars.
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Anonymous05/31/10
really Liked it.
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Anonymous08/03/10
Great story except for the last sentence . . .
Stupid bitch deserved everything that came her way. Hubbie did not deserve the total disrespect that his cheating whore of a wife dumped on him. Good story except for the wimpy last sentence. A good editor would have told you to delete it!
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Anonymous08/29/10
Agree with previous anon - good story but the last sentense changed the flavor.
It is always good to see a cheating spouse get kicked to the curb any day of the year. Once a cheater, always a cheater - example in point is that super slut from DQS's slow novel.
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Anonymous09/24/10
win again
Last line should have read, "...maybe some day I will call her, but then she would win again..."
brilliant the slut got wat she deserved and more but she got off lightly i would of made her leave town as well
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Anonymous01/27/11
Four
I gave you a four instead of a five because of the last line.
Wish you had told her you witnessed her whole conversation with Phil and allowed a little more of her suffering - if she is capable of suffering.
The story read that he was rather tired of her selfish and threatening bullshit before he knew she was going to screw Phil. She threw Phil in his face during the argument. The husband already knew that she had been touched by Phil before they had married. So the fact that he overheard Phil talking about their previous fucks was just icing on the cake. No long story here...
But either way, it expresses emotions in ways we'd never do ourselves, doesn't it?
Stories about suicide may be unrealistic because we don't do it ourselves (otherwise, of course, we wouldn't be reading this!), but it doesn't stop people writing stories with suicides. Romeo and Juliet is a classic example!
Someone needs to figure out a way to convice Dwhorecuck that this is a site for fiction, not biographies.
Charlie Bear, setting the inane ramblings of Dwhorecuck aside, for a short story you did drive some strong emotions with this. I'm sure that is what you were trying to do so I just wanted you knew you hit a home run with this one.
Take her back without marriage. Treat her like crap, if she puts up with it for about six months or a year start treating her better. Never marry her again. A good story. The big fine for burning stuff in his own front yard is ridiculous, though. Must have been in NYC or some other stupid place.
Though it wouldn't surprise me, that woman sounds damaged...
The idea that losing an argument can be evened out by cheating with someone.. And not just someone, but also someone you KNOW the person you argued with despises...
The thing about her actions is since he didn't know about the fucking, it turns out to be more of a passive aggressive action... sort of like spitting on someone's hamburger...
It's so nice to see a guy who had the balls to do what he did, unlike, some of the other wimps, pussy husbands I have read about in here. thank you for showing that there are guys ( like myself ) did what it took to kick her ass out.
i wouldve given it a 5* but why didnt he get back at her friend that was helping her.also why did he let the divorce go her way? he shouldve made sure everyone knew what was going on.
I hate fucking cheaters. She was a stupid cunt who lost the best thing in her life because she couldn't keep her legs closed. With her husbands enemy no else. Fucking cunt.
Susie answers the phone. "Hi Susie, this is Larry". All Susie hears is a female moan n the sounds of sex. Then she hears Larry say, "Sorry, bitch but you lose." I hope this takes care of all of the people who were bitching about him maybe calling her again.
I'm suprised that he didn't know about her cheating
the first two times. People like her usually give off a certain vibe when they think they have put something over on someone dumber than them. Might have been a self satisfied air or maybe a condescending little smirk the next day when he didn't have a clue. She was pretty self centered for sure and I wouldn't have been above the lover to brag to someone about what he was doing and it getting back to hubby. He did the right thing, just leave her alone and if she wants to believe that he will call her sometime, let her believe it. He isn't going to call, not at all.
There is something wrong with a marriage if the concept of win and lose enter the relationship. Marriage is supposed to be the ultimate relationship of COOPERATION not COMPETITION. So, if you have a spouse that thinks they need to compete with you, you have a shitty marriage.
I can't understand why, after a cooling off period (perhaps a long time, perhaps not so long), people can't or won't talk. Talking doesn't mean they have to get together again. Talking doesn't mean that all is forgiven. Talking does give an opportunity to explain and resolve though.
The last line of the tale. "Who knows. Maybe someday I will call her."
I'll call her a cheating fucking skank cunt. Get the fuck away from me whore.
Yeah, I like that.
The last line screwed up an otherwise good story. Why on earth would he ever want to call the cheating slut? He was well rid of the bitch. The rest of the story did not give the impression that he was stupid, so why the last line?
Listen, you never can say never. He may call her an idiot, or he may call her a slut, you never can tell. Here is the Paul Harvey, if Susie was screwing around, shouldn't Patty's husband wonder about his wife? I mean she left her there with him, knowing she was going to get laid, what does that make her? What pray tell does she tell her husband happened with Susie? Doesn't that open her to an IIED suit?
I agree with the other comments: Bad last line. She has a shitty personality. This is a personality disorder, it is essentially un-treatable and beyond her control. There is no cure for being a selfish piece of shit.
He gave the cheating bitch everything and except for one punch to Larry's solar plexis , that was all the damage he did to Larry? Wimp.Wimp. Wimp. Where I live the two cheaters would be gator bait. Not your usual standard. Three Stars.
English
:)
Pretty much the same way I went with my X. Twenty years together, then two weeks notice while our kids was at summer camp. She moved to a friend waiting for me to leave. As we had kids I leaved everything as untouched as possible when I left.. I thought that we could reconcile our differences later, but five months later another guy (workmate to her) moves in with her as his family had thrown him out. So there he was in my home with my kids my dog and cat, with my lying slut wife that had worked & fu*ed with him for f*k knows how long... You gotta give it to her... She was real smart, had she told me directly I think I might have ... But it all came in pieces and bits over half a year... Maybe they were soulmates then? As he left his kids for her.. To my eyes he must be one sorry piece of ass..My daughter told me that she (X)lives alone now so the 'soulmating' only held some years it seems... Not that I care, I wouldn't touch her with a ten foot pole anyway.. And no I haven't told the kids about it... I had a rather hard childhood myself and much of my efforts have been to make sure off them growing up safe and in the same place with friends they know of since childhood, and cared for.. And she's a good mother even if a lying slut.. But I stopped talking with her that day I found out about that guy... And sometimes I wonder if my youngest is mine or.. But heck, she destroyed my life but I don't need to take it out on the kids for some cheap revenge... Cheers Yoron.
OH MY GOD
CHARLIEBEAR you violated the most sacred tenants of Literotica when the husband walked up and barged in to the room. WIMP husbands do not do that. They shake and fume and stomp their feet and end up walking away while they dream up cutsie pie little games to catch their wives...hey the dumb ass has already caught her. He pukes about every five minutes and cries continually while he moans about his wife forsaking their most sacred and beautiful marriage. It's like it's an icon or something. Glad to see it treated as it really is...a slut wife and a farce of a marriage.marriedwithballs@yahoo.com
Dump the last line
Everything is destroyed, but maybe I'll call her????
The last line wreaked the rest of the story.
not very phil(ing) for her
her own self destructive personality aspects caught up with her, and he's away from her
Great until the last line
You had a well told story, until the last line. Why would any sane man want to get together with a back stabber like her? There are a lot more wonderful single women out there than good men. Thanks
Good story!
I hate fucking wimps and was so glad I didn't find one here. Five Stars.
really Liked it.
Great story except for the last sentence . . .
Stupid bitch deserved everything that came her way. Hubbie did not deserve the total disrespect that his cheating whore of a wife dumped on him. Good story except for the wimpy last sentence. A good editor would have told you to delete it!
Agree with previous anon - good story but the last sentense changed the flavor.
It is always good to see a cheating spouse get kicked to the curb any day of the year. Once a cheater, always a cheater - example in point is that super slut from DQS's slow novel.
win again
Last line should have read, "...maybe some day I will call her, but then she would win again..."
maybe some day I will call her
a cheating slut!
brilliant the slut got wat she deserved and more but she got off lightly i would of made her leave town as well
Four
I gave you a four instead of a five because of the last line.
Wish you had told her you witnessed her whole conversation with Phil and allowed a little more of her suffering - if she is capable of suffering.
BTW, Like your stories - don't quit!
Loved it, dont let him
wimp out, keep to your guns, fuck that cheating slut
Stupid and unrealistic.
No one talks like that and for breaking and entering and assult and battery he would go to prison. Therefore, I gave it 1*.
Good story actually
The story read that he was rather tired of her selfish and threatening bullshit before he knew she was going to screw Phil. She threw Phil in his face during the argument. The husband already knew that she had been touched by Phil before they had married. So the fact that he overheard Phil talking about their previous fucks was just icing on the cake. No long story here...
DWornock makes me laugh
Of course it's an unrealistic story.
Or maybe not.
People do actually do these dramatic things.
But either way, it expresses emotions in ways we'd never do ourselves, doesn't it?
Stories about suicide may be unrealistic because we don't do it ourselves (otherwise, of course, we wouldn't be reading this!), but it doesn't stop people writing stories with suicides. Romeo and Juliet is a classic example!
Give drama chance. Haha!
Help!
Someone needs to figure out a way to convice Dwhorecuck that this is a site for fiction, not biographies.
Charlie Bear, setting the inane ramblings of Dwhorecuck aside, for a short story you did drive some strong emotions with this. I'm sure that is what you were trying to do so I just wanted you knew you hit a home run with this one.
Please Larry,
You need to ring the girl,she needs a pity fuck like they all do haha
She has to win.
I liked that. Well, in her determined desire to always win the cheating whore slut wife lost, big time.
FUCK HER
HA HA HA
Quickly In & Out; I Liked It
In a longer story there surely would have been more character development, but in this story it worked.
WOW
I loved your story only because it happened to me,BUTT my problem was that my anger got the best of me and I left the SOB,Crippled".......oh well
Yes, give her a call.
Take her back without marriage. Treat her like crap, if she puts up with it for about six months or a year start treating her better. Never marry her again. A good story. The big fine for burning stuff in his own front yard is ridiculous, though. Must have been in NYC or some other stupid place.
Nice work -
Check her out first but a good fuck toy might be fun -
Especially one that might be willing to do anything to try to win him back heh - see who wins now -
Nice one -
even in another town good ol phil will keep on keepin on and you let him escape unharmed
tigers and stripes, leopards and spots . . . oh myyy
revenge sex is the same regardless of who is doing it.
the cheating wife and the willing bedmate are equally culpable.
Though it wouldn't surprise me, that woman sounds damaged...
The idea that losing an argument can be evened out by cheating with someone.. And not just someone, but also someone you KNOW the person you argued with despises...
The thing about her actions is since he didn't know about the fucking, it turns out to be more of a passive aggressive action... sort of like spitting on someone's hamburger...
Gave it a 4....
Not enough damage to the cheating bitch or Phil!
"It Meant Nothing To Her"
How nice that her fidelity to their marriage "meant nothing to her."
He is well rid of her, the only thing he did wrong was giving her whatever she wanted.
gf patty
Her bff covered for her 3 times
it's so nice to see
It's so nice to see a guy who had the balls to do what he did, unlike, some of the other wimps, pussy husbands I have read about in here. thank you for showing that there are guys ( like myself ) did what it took to kick her ass out.
It's so nice to see 2
Oh and that's why I gave it a 5
good
i wouldve given it a 5* but why didnt he get back at her friend that was helping her.also why did he let the divorce go her way? he shouldve made sure everyone knew what was going on.
good story
I'm sure glad there isn't any kids involved.
I'LL SHOW YOU WHAT'S WHAT
ant that should teach you a lesson. TK U MLJ LV NV
Yeah
I hate fucking cheaters. She was a stupid cunt who lost the best thing in her life because she couldn't keep her legs closed. With her husbands enemy no else. Fucking cunt.
why ruin a good story
Why would you call the slut? Good story till the very last sentence. It could NEVER be the same, so why bother.
The Phone Call
Susie answers the phone. "Hi Susie, this is Larry". All Susie hears is a female moan n the sounds of sex. Then she hears Larry say, "Sorry, bitch but you lose." I hope this takes care of all of the people who were bitching about him maybe calling her again.
I'm suprised that he didn't know about her cheating
the first two times. People like her usually give off a certain vibe when they think they have put something over on someone dumber than them. Might have been a self satisfied air or maybe a condescending little smirk the next day when he didn't have a clue. She was pretty self centered for sure and I wouldn't have been above the lover to brag to someone about what he was doing and it getting back to hubby. He did the right thing, just leave her alone and if she wants to believe that he will call her sometime, let her believe it. He isn't going to call, not at all.
no
No way. I'd never call.
Enjoyed it
one evil bitch. Thanks.
Win or Lose?
There is something wrong with a marriage if the concept of win and lose enter the relationship. Marriage is supposed to be the ultimate relationship of COOPERATION not COMPETITION. So, if you have a spouse that thinks they need to compete with you, you have a shitty marriage.
One thing I can't understand
I can't understand why, after a cooling off period (perhaps a long time, perhaps not so long), people can't or won't talk. Talking doesn't mean they have to get together again. Talking doesn't mean that all is forgiven. Talking does give an opportunity to explain and resolve though.
Yeah
The last line of the tale. "Who knows. Maybe someday I will call her."
I'll call her a cheating fucking skank cunt. Get the fuck away from me whore.
Yeah, I like that.
Damn
Last line screwed up an otherwise good story.
The last line screwed up an otherwise good story. Why on earth would he ever want to call the cheating slut? He was well rid of the bitch. The rest of the story did not give the impression that he was stupid, so why the last line?
Second read,
Listen, you never can say never. He may call her an idiot, or he may call her a slut, you never can tell. Here is the Paul Harvey, if Susie was screwing around, shouldn't Patty's husband wonder about his wife? I mean she left her there with him, knowing she was going to get laid, what does that make her? What pray tell does she tell her husband happened with Susie? Doesn't that open her to an IIED suit?
Read it again
I agree with the other comments: Bad last line. She has a shitty personality. This is a personality disorder, it is essentially un-treatable and beyond her control. There is no cure for being a selfish piece of shit.
Too Wimpy
He gave the cheating bitch everything and except for one punch to Larry's solar plexis , that was all the damage he did to Larry? Wimp.Wimp. Wimp. Where I live the two cheaters would be gator bait. Not your usual standard. Three Stars.
Indeed Nancy. Indeed.
Prats like Phil would not have lasted long in our neighbourhood either.
What a slag that cheating cunt is too.
Every time we fight I need a revenge fuck. I might even take it home tonight and let him suck it out of me.
Surrrre, she loves him. It meant nothing.
Those 2 are dumber than a sack of Hillaries
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