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All Comments on 'The Little Ballerina'

by dirtyjoe69

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
The rhyming is nice

and the imagery evokes every young girl as she climbs out of her cocoon into the possibilities of being a woman.

Well done!

Regards, DJ

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
The dance.

An unusually exquisite experience ~ watching a young girl struggling to do her first dance steps. A thing of beauty ~ the memory a joy forever. Loved the illustration.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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A light little joyous piece.

tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
THE HOURS SPENT

learning a trade-off. TK U MLJ LV NV

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